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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Nov 10, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Riding Upon A Silver Moon

Riding Upon A Silver Moon
Children Poem
 
People everywhere ride silver moons
Stopping here and there
Collecting pixie dust
 
Riding winged horses across open seas
Traveling under midnight skies
Hands fill with pixies toss upon the sea
 
Schools of fishes jumped at the moon
Catching pixies in their gills
Veneering the ocean floor
 
Riding upon a silver moon
Far away in pixie land
People everywhere collected pixie dust

— Barbara Writes, Nov 10, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 7 months ago

Greeneyes

thanks for reading and commenting i appreciate it. glad you liked it ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Barb

Pixie dust, how charming. I see little eyes glittering as they are showered in a magical shimmer. Lovely sweet poem. Keep them coming dear girl. Love from Lyz. XX
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

lyz

glad you like it, thanks for commenting. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Barb

Always love reading your poetry. Love to all, Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Barbara

Thanks for the moon ride I am sorry to be late lol love and hugs Jayne x x
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Seren

I thought I submit my response to your comment. I see I didn't, Thanks for commenting, appreciated as always, better late that never *Smile* ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara