EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN

EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN

Life cannot be equated , without this fact
A straight line , is still straight
All directions of straight will constantly
Adjust.

Look both ways before you cross the street

See life as it’s bends
Feel life as it’s curves
The joinery of life
Has corners , adjusting all the
Turns within it's turns

Corners are chapters
Of a straight line
But each corner may not have a green light
Red should cause you to stop
Look both ways before you decided
Maybe some corners are turns within turns
To make the direction a straight line is
The hardness concept to learn

— press, Nov 09, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Hello Press

Is this really you press ??? joking huni ... where have you been ? cause somethings going on with you again lol ... I can always tell when theres change in your life .. your writing changes with you but I am seriously impressed with this one ... you have a little formatting problem but that can be sorted in the edits ... looks a little untidy ... also is the word in the second line meant to be sill or still? ... cause you know either could work ... this is a really clever little piece and I like where your headed ... I gave you five simply because its fucking good and I can see you've really reached with this one Love and hugs Jayne x x x

press

16 years 7 months ago

JC

This is why I need you .Because you take the mentality of a men ? that forgets about the little things [ as we men do ] and point them out. And yes JC ? something is changing in my life . I have not been able the write poetry for weeks now. This one poem took me a week. And that is messing with my head , so I thought about it , is it sex [ no] is it my business [ no] family life [no]. But I'm proud to see that your moving on. So we will see what is next for me