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From The Corner Of My Eye Revised
From the corner of my eye,you seem to love me so
But when I stare straight ahead, its her that makes you glow
From the corner of my eye, your kiss is oh so real
When I stare straight ahead, its for another one to feel
From the corner of my eye, you smile down at me
When I stare straight ahead, its for another one to see
From the corner of my eye, you whisper your promise in my ear
When I stare straight ahead,its for another one to hear
From the corner of my eye,we dance beneath the stars
You hold me close and tell me the future will be ours
But when I stare straight ahead, you do not even look my way
It is for another to hear all the wonderful things you have to say
I can not face reality, no matter how I Try
So I will live the rest of my life, from the corner of my eye
Critiques
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
thank you
KINGZOMBIE
16 years 7 months ago
I like it
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
thank you!
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Elizabeth