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The last days of my Dad Joe.
How I treasure those days,
And who was to know,
These were the last days
of mi old dad Joe,
pipe in hand n’ glad to see,
I’d come just to make him a nice cup of tea,
A simple gesture of which he knew,
Was from my heart from me to you,
No “Dad do you mind if,” or “can borrow that”,
Just cover his peg with my kaki hat.
We’d chat all about the years gone bye ,
and reminisce until he’d cry,
he was a right lad’ you know in his younger days,
with the war at an end and his discharge pay,
he’d been to Tabrook with his old mate Seth,
but when asked, all he’d say was;
too much death ,
on his face you could tell
he’d seen God n’ Hell,
and he’d change the subject,
ho’ it was bad
you could tell.
Well,
We buried him last week,
It was a quiet little do,
with a couple of mates
he’d hung on too.
I’ll never forget his mate Seth’s face
when they read out a letter he’d wrote for his wake,
“I’d have been here for the last 50 years”
but for the brave soul who saved me ,
he’s standing right near,
I wont pull you a pint yet Seth; me old bludger mate,
I think you’d prefer that I hang back n’wait, ha!
Anyhow ; they’ve Bitter on Tap and rivers of stout ,
So I’ll hang on and wait ,cause “Its your bloody shout”
The crowd had a laugh and we toasted the day,
I saw tears in his eyes as Seth walked away,
Im ever so glad that I shared his last years,
To my sister and brother his life wasn’t clear
But to me I was privileged ,
There to the end,
And the stories of Joe
and his old war time friend.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
A poem from the heart always