Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Kabir (3)

Kabir (3)

When you serenade
the glory of a lily
do you
sing to her
the praises
of the Rose?

Fool!

Kabir would
say: Return
when you have grown up
and know
how to speak of Love!



— Kailashana, Nov 08, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

More from this author

Critiques

D

Dalton

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Kailashana

Loved the poem, but forgive my ignorance who or what is Kabir? Is he an inspiration of yours. I cannot find fault in your poems I love them all. Dalton. Short and sweet.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks for reading, Dalton.

Thanks for reading, Dalton. I have poetry that is several pages long, but my favourites seem to be the shorter pieces, the haikuesque ones actually. To answer your question re Kabir: My Beloved Michael from Germany also wrote under two noms de plume, one was Kabir... Kabir is also a Sufi Yogi, poet & saint.. revered by Muslims, Hindus & Sikhs, he often talks to himself in his poetry. From http://www.poetry-chaikhana.com/K/Kabir/ Between the conscious and the unconscious, the mind has put up a swing: English version by Robert Bly Original Language Hindi Muslim / Sufi Yoga / Hindu 15th Century Between the conscious and the unconscious, the mind has put up a swing: all earth creatures, even the supernovas, sway between these two trees, and it never winds down. Angels, animals, humans, insects by the million, also the wheeling sun and moon; ages go by, and it goes on. Everything is swinging: heaven, earth, water, fire, and the secret one slowly growing a body. Kabir saw that for fifteen seconds, and it made him a servant for life. Love, Anna
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Ma

OMG I just read your poem and then that above I am sitting here in stunned silence ... damn it you just shattered me ... now I have to go pick up the pieces .... inspirational just doesnt cover it ... love and biggest hugs Jaughter mwah