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Growing into Battle
Why have I been left to guard these woods?
I am brave!
I can fight!
I would battle bravely on the field
Remember the day, I saved Micha's life?
I didn't need to be told what to do
I killed three grown men to reach his side
Now I am denied, left to watch their backs!
Who would think to use these woods?
They are far from the field of honor
From here, I hear the shouts and sounds of battle
Stay here like a child!
I could run to them and help!
But I am a good soldier
I do what I am told
The din of sword and shield clatter
Then lessen... I fear the worst!
Breathless footsteps...
A sign not recognised
Hesitant eyes looking
A motion...Two!
My heart leaps!
Steady...
Motionless, I wait
NOW!
Taken by surprise, the first falls
His partner is a veteran
He blocks my overconfident blow
Swirling cloak, bull-fighter fashion
Slashing sword, clubbing shield
I am forced back
Mighty blows, I strike!
Arms shaken with his vigor
We dance...
My body is my mind, needing no instruction
The rythmn is mesmerizing
Experience and age
Contending with youthful zeal and innovation
He tires... Just managing...
I rise to the occasion and he falls
As my vision clears...
My fellows in arms are gathered
They give huzza's and cheer
I am clapped upon the back
Ruffled and poked
Smiled upon
Father is so proud!
" I knew he would win!"
" I put him there! He did what he was supposed to!"
Now understanding comes...
Critiques
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Sir Gee
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Oh what a battle I am exhausted,
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Gee
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Growing into battle
themoonman
16 years 7 months ago
Gee...
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Battle...