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The colour of pain

 

"The colour of pain"

 

Red sparks

furious fiery 

furnaces 

the burning embers of the beast's talons 

and breath of flames

soured yellow streaks 

of vicious pains 

burgundy black 

blaze daemon's claws 

scratches fissures clefts

and the vermillion 

searing 

crimsoned marks of wounds 

resound their volcano 

of colours in the foundry 

of your heart's smarting gasps, 

torn to shreds, 

shrivelled, 

desperately agonising 

in the viridian death-like colours 

of hells disharmonious gape 

its smash of sounds 

squashing all liquids 

mercury-like 

migrating to parts of you 

that would have peace 

and the palest pinks and lilacs 

of a dawning day, 

its shadows filled with sentiments 

of cream and gold, 

of laced dappled dream-like blues 

and bowls of wine that flow 

and glow 

in mother-of-pearl fountains 

in the mind. 

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Oh damn and blast those devilled blacks and reds 

of fiery furies blown across the sky 

at night to give delight

and yet when felt inside 

they tear and smart

they wrench the heart this way and that

deplete my soul its stretched out hand 

in desperate hope of holding fast 

to life's last breath of faith 

in what 

in what we all feel safe in 

and can call our own 

a home within the body 

where no daemons come

a haven quiet and holy 

in its positive expression

a cove of calm 

where winds of fate can't blow 

where you and I can flow 

like spirits in a womb

of a new born life elsewhere 

not here 

but there

and where is that great place

we have no notion of its face 

or how to reach its door

where all things love 

and e'en adore

and pain no more can drench 

the carpets of the floor of our hearts 

instead give gifts of solace 

smoothed 

imparted with such grace

that wisdom descries the poetry 

of its pace and light

would that we might reach this haven of a garden 

cease to roam 

the streets of evil 

sink down into the lap of sweet content 

and feel life's loves close to

inside us 

so intent on making dreamed paradise's wide windowed view

the place to now reside 

yes 

me 

and you.  



 


— Nordic cloud, Nov 07, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Ann I’d like to introduce

Ann I'd like to introduce you to Stuart, he just wrote the Colour of Envy. :-) ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

like the doves of old let loose

Oh WHAT a fantastic compliment coming from you, whom I so very much admire!!! You are SOMETHING ELSE for me, here on this site, a being possessing such suchness, such magic thoughts that you awaken hidden feelings in the depths of our minds and we flourish because of you you sister goddess in your blue robes of rhetoric. We all love you and are reflected into beauty with your words, though not one sided so, you have the humour and the joyful playfulness of sages, the vision of them too, we love you. Thank you. Just wrote the title thinking of once a blue moon someone like you turns up!! And then it developed, written 10 minutes ago dearest Anna:- "Pink Blue-moons" Lying latent underneath the lulled verses of the great my mundane soul its tales relate and just before they dissipate you come along and sing your songs awake my hidden rights and wrongs them throw away and leave the sway of rhetoric the adults play and bless oh bless that happy day when from my pen it flowed the deepest, deepest heart-felt knowings resting in their cloistered prisons like the doves of old let loose they grey, like dust become the papers floating on the wind of my brains dreams like vapours from the past, and from my screams of recognition that I can, can I yes, I know I can, here and there can you embellish, oh my heart's set free, my mind my body too such release is more euphoric when its caused by you, you poets blood in your blue veins like royalty coming no longer once a blue moon sporting in the dawn light's dew oh I'm ever thankful to you Neopoets, all of you. It became to ALL here but was started thinking of you. Just Ann.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Bravo!

You have my attention! Such fire! I await the resounding notes of this epic battle, echoing from the height of reason, and plunging to to depths of madness. We dance! ~ Sir Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ann

We dance in the dervish and are fired with with your inspiration ...and from the heart of pain the first thing we see is colour ... and red happens to be it ..beautifully done dear Ann ... pleasure to read love and hugs Jayne x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Red, is to us mortals the fire,

Red the red the red, is to us mortals the fire, the ultimate colour of all passions let loose, those of love, of pain, of sentiment blazed across our emotions, its blood-like fiery flames touch our poetic brains and create stains on paper, written in inspired enthusiasm, our whole, our body, mind and 'soul' inspired. Then suddenly one of the most moving scenes comes to mind as when in England we celebrate those who died for us all during the war, those clouds of poppies falling, yes it is November and we remember them now, they fall upon the crowds once more to remember, remember every man bird or beast that died because of human stupidity and greed. Yes that is pain deep felt and REAL. You are right dear Jayne and you know it too. My love to der you and our love to support you in your hour of need, heart felt and strong. Your friend Ann of Norway.
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Remembrance day 11th November here

11th hour of the 11th day of the 11th month ... we remember with poppies ... and my grandfather uncles all fought in all of our wars ... in every war one of my family has died ... we always remember and honour them as they should and we have passed the tradition onto our children ... their sacrifice both sides,shouldnt be forgotten ... maybe future generations will learn from the bloodshed I damn well hope so ... love and big hugs Jayne x x
SR

Stuart Reiss

16 years 7 months ago

Hi Ann,I liked it and the

Hi Ann, I liked it and the poem was a very nice piece of work all the way through. Well thought out I might add Well done Ann best regards Stuart
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Orphani

16 years 7 months ago

Whats up with all this

Whats up with all this fellow artist friend It's like a volcanic shit fit in a nunnery wine cellar. you better laugh or your poetry license is revoked and you get hung by your ankles and your feet cained and I think that would be duly sufficient, and if not we have ways of tickling the living pea out of you girl.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

and how odd you look that way up O

I'm upside down already my good friend Barry O will you tarry o in my parlour o. There I hang chained, cut and mortared and I'm laughing never you mind, yes I'm laughing and I had to get back here post haste when I found that I was upside down and how odd you look that way up O how odd indeed, so that's it, you want me to write an upside down poem, with my hands in chains and my mind in pea soup, oh are you still at the Halloween weekend and taking your pranks even further afield all the way to Norway? Well I shall have ago... o. o. OH none, oh none in the cellar of one and there's no lower we can go 'cos the snow's outside deep and white in the middle of the dark black night and try as we might we cannot see the light because of soup, soup, soup green as pea soup in the brain the grey matter in the vein of porridge looped nine day hot and nine days cold and now I'm getting younger not getting old because you've made me so bold as to write this a load of piss. Mercy my heads in a bucket for you for you Barry if you tarry it'll be you be you! Ann.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 6 months ago

you hold such a dreamlike potency of creativity in my mind, & it

Dearest precious Anushka... bahhhh that you should ever feel any pain, I hate the thought of it, truly... but what a write dear one... On my supposedly brief (hah!) visit to Neo, how could I not come find you & what joy here... its smash of sounds squashing all liquids mercury-like migrating to parts of you that would have peace and the palest pinks and lilacs of a dawning day, its shadows filled with sentiments of cream and gold, of laced dappled dream-like blues Oh just lovely Ann... I dream you in my dreams & we merge in a kind of laughter & imagery that has no boundaries, the sound/sight element is interchangable & blends... I feel if anyone could understand that you could (I am laughing at myself now! It must sound crazy)... But, my Norwegian muse, you hold such a dreamlike potency of creativity in my mind, & it has a wonderful omnipresent sense to it (ah the benefits of our wonderful imagination, how I love it). I hope you are well dear one, I am supposed to be reducing the use of computers etc. (electromagnetic energies may be detrimental currently my doctors suggest)... plus I am always so tempted by Neo to play here & not sleep... I must go I have a wedding to sing at on Saturday & tomorrow singing lessons to lead then practice all afternoon until my lovely "otters" arrive so I will have no chance to catch up on sleep tomorrow.. I miss you so dear one. Much love xxx Cheers Anni~ "When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace". H.H. the Dalai Lama
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

Oh there you are and there

Oh there you are and there you are and there you are again, how lovely to see/hear you Anni, I wonder if I will come to suffer from the same in time, as I am at this machine a long time each day, until my neck begins to hurt!!! What wonderfully wonderful things you say to me, dear dear Anni, Of course I understand you, your expressions, I dance in their music, I hear them sung in my minds ear and I love it. How I wish I could hear you at the wedding! How I wish we were not so very far away. But then how glad I am that we have met at all, two people that would never have met any other way perhaps! Thank you for thank you so much for appreciating what I do, I am having enormous fun commenting on his and that, oh its intoxicating!! Love to you and all who commented here from Anushka.
L

lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Ann

A great colorful and painful write, lol. Well written and a wonderful read. Not that I like pain,lol. Well done dear Ann. Love Lyz. XX