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The colour of pain
"The colour of pain"
Red sparks
furious fiery
furnaces
the burning embers of the beast's talons
and breath of flames
soured yellow streaks
of vicious pains
burgundy black
blaze daemon's claws
scratches fissures clefts
and the vermillion
searing
crimsoned marks of wounds
resound their volcano
of colours in the foundry
of your heart's smarting gasps,
torn to shreds,
shrivelled,
desperately agonising
in the viridian death-like colours
of hells disharmonious gape
its smash of sounds
squashing all liquids
mercury-like
migrating to parts of you
that would have peace
and the palest pinks and lilacs
of a dawning day,
its shadows filled with sentiments
of cream and gold,
of laced dappled dream-like blues
and bowls of wine that flow
and glow
in mother-of-pearl fountains
in the mind.
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Oh damn and blast those devilled blacks and reds
of fiery furies blown across the sky
at night to give delight
and yet when felt inside
they tear and smart
they wrench the heart this way and that
deplete my soul its stretched out hand
in desperate hope of holding fast
to life's last breath of faith
in what
in what we all feel safe in
and can call our own
a home within the body
where no daemons come
a haven quiet and holy
in its positive expression
a cove of calm
where winds of fate can't blow
where you and I can flow
like spirits in a womb
of a new born life elsewhere
not here
but there
and where is that great place
we have no notion of its face
or how to reach its door
where all things love
and e'en adore
and pain no more can drench
the carpets of the floor of our hearts
instead give gifts of solace
smoothed
imparted with such grace
that wisdom descries the poetry
of its pace and light
would that we might reach this haven of a garden
cease to roam
the streets of evil
sink down into the lap of sweet content
and feel life's loves close to
inside us
so intent on making dreamed paradise's wide windowed view
the place to now reside
yes
me
and you.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Ann I’d like to introduce
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
like the doves of old let loose
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Bravo!
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Oh you excell in commenting good Sir Geezer
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Red, is to us mortals the fire,
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Remembrance day 11th November here
Stuart Reiss
16 years 7 months ago
Hi Ann,I liked it and the
Orphani
16 years 7 months ago
Whats up with all this
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
and how odd you look that way up O
Cloudthings
16 years 6 months ago
you hold such a dreamlike potency of creativity in my mind, & it
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
Oh there you are and there
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Ann