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Nov 07, 2009
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Ra
Ra
we were scarab beetles
mating,
we were emeralds
in the sun,
moon,
ever the jealous lover,
crushed us with her longing
and we were rivers into
the afterlife
and now swirling sands
of discordant time have
given wings to swans
of our long-lived reflection
and I high priestess of your
beating heart burn with the light
of ten thousand days
sing songs of praise.
we were scarab beetles
mating,
we were emeralds
in the sun,
moon,
ever the jealous lover,
crushed us with her longing
and we were rivers into
the afterlife
and now swirling sands
of discordant time have
given wings to swans
of our long-lived reflection
and I high priestess of your
beating heart burn with the light
of ten thousand days
sing songs of praise.
— Kailashana, Nov 07, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
As she sails unmoved in the azure sky.
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
And my dear sister from
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
I do so love the idea of their 'god' being a 'way'
Dalton
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Kailashana
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Dalton, thank you.
Stuart Reiss
16 years 7 months ago
Hey ~A,You know that Ra and
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ma
DloganB
16 years 7 months ago
NICE
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
ANNA
ziggy
16 years 7 months ago
ra
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
Oh Anna, we are kindred, I loved this dear one, as I do all you
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
hello