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What It Is

it is the smile that
cannot be bought by
avarice nor money
the grin of knowing
another has you
welling in her heart

it is the surge of want
within a glance
the smouldering look
that burns as bright
as when it first began
so many years ago

it is her hands upon you
pulling you in close
leading you to where
all intimacy of warmth
can be enjoyed without
the limits of restraint

it is the taste of eagerness
on trembling skin
the aroma of anticipation
drawn deep by shuddering breath
as her body presses upwards
for your aching touch

it is that breathless moment
poised upon the brink of joy
where her arms encirle
and her need will be fulfilled
when the feel of her becomes too much
and you must move within


it is the urgency of voice
that calls your name
the feel of her between your lips
the heat of her enfolding
the shake of her release
that makes control impossible

it is contentment
her heart so loud beneath you
shared  breath trembling
on cooling skin
and the sated certainty
of a new life made



— Race_9togo, Nov 07, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

I have missed other poems of

I have missed other poems of yours, (will read them), this one is brilliantly pure, just right, alluding to and taking us through the dance of perfect intimacy without it becoming pornographic. And the new life? Boy or girl? I knew when both of my children were conceived. Five stars. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Two boys, both planned. Like you, I knew both times when they were conceived. I use pornography to write these poems, actually. I do this (I think) because I'm male, and thus kind of stuck in the physical side of things, if you know what I mean. I guess we men are built that way! But then I take all the porn and explicitness - the boring stuff - and replace it with my feelings and emotions, and implied physicality - leaving it to the reader's imagination is far more effective. Seems to work. Thanks again Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
L

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Jim

A beautiful sensual write and with an amazing result. I adored this and once again, another gem. Love Lyz. XX
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Jim, Your have quite

Dear Jim, Your have quite the tecnique going on, the ability to make raw sex touching and romantic---but still hot, oh yeah, hot. Like this verse--- "it is the surge of want within a glance, the smouldering look that burns as bright as when it first began so many years ago" and this one--- "it is contentment her heart so loud beneath you shared breath trembling on cooling skin and the shared certainty of a new life made" Good work. Yours, Deelilah
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 6 months ago

JIm...

It's hard to describe the tender heat, the glow of sexual love without going overboard... but you have done it here. the aroma of anticipation... loved that line as it so aptly describes the heat between two in the moment of conception. With that being said, I believe you have the wrong title, it seems you are going for "what love is" with the title, and with much of the poem but it ends up in the moment of knowing conception... which I liked very much, and indeed is part of making love to the right person, but it seemed to be reaching (for me)... maybe a different title could bring it all together is all I'm suggesting. great poem Jim! Richard
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Jim

You have described the build up the passion,the feelings so beautifully without being porn ... and I dont care how you wrote it ... whatever works works ... its hte finished product that counts and this is brilliantly writen ... and I think this is my new favourite of yours ... roew Jim its getting hot in here lol damn its already 36 degrees here lmao ;) you got my nomination love and hugs Jayne x x
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you everyone

For reading and enjoying. I really hate this collective, cookie-cutter reply! Sorry about it, I just have so little time right now! Thanks again Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 6 months ago

Oh Yes! Jim, this indeed

Oh Yes! Jim, this indeed what it is :) and this is why I have missed this place despite time constraints and certain barriers. Having someone on the other side of the world express so beautifully, so eloquently where I am and what I am experiencing never ceases to blow me away! It is love that makes us all the same. Thank you Jim :) much love Beki xxx
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

:D Love rocks, don’t

:D Love rocks, don't it? Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race