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Know
Beating euphoria
in its dense mass,
energising to
overcome
cocooning
in the rubble
of remininse,
swallowing gumdrops
that grow bones,
while brokering deals
with a devil
and in a grotto
spinning the prism,
watching
as a kaleidoscope
of life,
glimmers by,
silent pictures
illuminated and
reflected from time,
strafe the walls
While drawing a line
between all pleasures
and agonies,
now run
out of thought,
as dogs of a devil,
snap at coat tails
Centering all belief
on one partical of god,
and released willingly,
this supplication
consuming
every molecule,
of fear
Flowing to believe
on a steepe,
mere heartbeats
into all infinities,
within the now
a knowing
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Anna's version
Euphoria beats
its dense mass,
energized to
overcome
In the cocoon
of the rubble,
reminiscence
swallows gumdrops–
bones grow anew,
broker deals
with the devil
In a grotto
spinning life’s prism,
is a glimmer of hope
watching a kaleidoscope
of silent pictures
illuminated and reflected
from time to time,
Strafes the walls
and draws a line
between all pleasures
and agonies,
now run
out of thought,
like dogs of a devil
snap at coat tails
If all belief
centers on
only one particle of god
released willingly,
then this supplication
shall consume
every molecule
of fear
Belief is a river
flowing
on a steppe,
mere heartbeats
into all infinities,
within the now,
a knowing
Critiques
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
With the now -
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Boni
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Cat
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Fate is faith with the
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ma
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
"Watching a kaleidoscope of silent pictures"
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ann
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Faith is in the knowing...
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Gee
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Truly amazing...
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Gee
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Nana