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MOUNTAIN LAKE WALK

Ripples on the surface of
this lake ,expanding circles 
from it`s epicenter make  
lapping sounds on the shore
washing over pebbles there
galore.

On that shore is where i stand
with those pebbles in my hand
that i gathered from the strand

In the distance i  see mountain
valleys with small wooden chalets

another face walks this strand its
their name i have etched in sand

warmth in a breeze recedes through 
meandering hills that spill to to the
shore where  pebbles galore are
washed under feet as we walk talk
and be .
— ziggy, Nov 06, 2009

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ziggy

What a walk and what a sight. This is another grand vision you have posted. Keep it up and I am loving these last few writes of yours immensley. Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX
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ziggy

16 years 7 months ago

hi there

i am glad you lke this one , lol at least i have one fan ,,,,,ziggy
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ziggy

Another lovely write ... I felt the thoughts between the last two stanza's maybe needed something I will think on it and if anything jumps out at me I will let you know ... love and biggest hugs Jayne x x
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ziggy

16 years 7 months ago

hi jayne

i know exactly what your saying as this is a re-write from years ago ,,,,,,,,,,,cheers for taking the time ,ziggy
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ziggy

I like how you have slowly revealed your romantic inner core. My favorite lines are: Ripples on the surface of this lake ,expanding circles from it`s epicenter make lapping sounds on the shore washing over pebbles there galore. Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 7 months ago

mountain .........

hi again cat this is a rewrite from yrs ago and you picked out those extra lines i put in lol what an eye you have ,,,,romantic innner core who me lol ,,,,,,,,,,,,,wait till you see the next mmmm....zigs cheers for reading this and taking the time to reply ,,,,,,,,,,,zigs x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

mountain

Ziggy A place i have visited often and wtitten about here on neopoets I would have to search my list of poems to find the ones i was thinking of. Wonderful peaceful day of which there are few. But like you the memory is a clear a day and recalled in seconds. Keep hold of this SPECIAL day my friend. blue
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

mountain ,,,,,,

hi mags its always great to have a write remind someone of a write of there`s many thanks ,,,,,zigs ........ i still have to reply to pm ,,,,,,,,,,,,,oops
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi again

thanks once again this is a recent edit of a old write glad you read it yours truly zigsssssssssss
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Just love this one Ziggy

I read your profile and I am impressed with you. The stone man and write a poem of that, as that is an art in itself also. You could always come here and do some stone work around my house as I love the look and different shades of rocks. Quite interesting my Ireland friend indeed Lovely write of imagery also Kudos ZIggy Love, Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.