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Nov 05, 2009
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Mary Magdalene, you were wronged.
Your brown body
And its lurching syntax were mistranslated;
Your kiss has been misquoted.
They remember you as a whore.
They say your body arched on the bed,
They say you breathed like your heart
Was trying to give birth to its constant kick,
They say your eyes lifted their hems so high
They flashed white and naked.
They say your damp hair curled like lit wicks.
..............They say you wanted Jesus.
This is untrue.
You were the woman possessed by seven demons.
Your body arched on the bed,
You breathed like your heart
Was trying to give birth to its constant kick,
Your eyes lifted their hems so high
They flashed white and naked.
Your damp hair curled like lit wicks.
You wanted Jesus.
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Can you blame them for this mistake?
Your scream,
When the seven demons were wrenched from you,
Sounded so much like the scream
Of a lost woman on a rocking bed,
Who cried when she came
Like a man had ripped the clothes off her voice.
— Diatom Shells, Nov 05, 2009
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Critiques
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Interpretation...
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear shell
Roscoe Lane
16 years 7 months ago
Magdalene
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
We have the same
bjp
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Diatom Shells,
Dalton
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Diatom
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 6 months ago
Not bible bashed...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Shells
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
This is fucking beautiful…
Diatom Shells
16 years 3 months ago
OOOh aaah!
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Returning to re-read this,