Brindha !My Daughter

She is going with her husband

To live in the days of heaven

Her eyes are shedding tears and smile

With a lot of emotions and expressions

She is leaving from this nest to a palace

to live with her beloved prince

She is very close to my soul and

very near to my eyes

How can I bear this distance?

My lips and mind have set with her name

How can I tolerate her departure

Cause she is my light of my life

She is my daughter and more that

Relationship

She is my guide and playmate in ground

She is my Mom and she is my divine

How can I leave her?

He is lucky and his days will be is a paradise

My days will be in a dark hell

Up to this minute

She gave me a life after her departure

Who will take care of me?

Her affection and love will go to her Prince and to her kids

How can I bear this great loss of my life?

I am calling Him to give me a birth as a child to her

to have her love and affection as her son.

Saktheee S Ravichandran

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 05, 2009

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Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Daughter...

Your title is appropriate. Your language use is better than it has been and from when I first started viewing your work. The theme is a universal one. When a child leaves home, often times a parent feels abandoned. If your daughter is all that she appears to be to you,and has taken on the role of someone who takes care of your house and makes meals for you, it can be even worse. Try to think of her as not being lost to you. Try thinking of of it as gaining a son! I am sure that if your daughter's husband is worthy and deserving of her, he will understand that you are still a part of her life, and need to feel connected. Hopefully, he will invite you to dinner at least once a week. Learn to cook for yourself, I mean really cook! Not just throw something together for sustanence. Maybe you will surprise yourself, and enjoy it! Your logic and consistency are very good and the flow is good. Peace to you Brother, ~ Gee