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Killer Retribution
Killer moves gently with the night
The dog is surprised
Feeling something akin to fright
Canine senses are apprised
Stealth and patience needed now
No mistakes, planned asassination
Confidence in the how
This... is his validation
Victim chosen for biggest effect
Street creds, highest marks
No higher respect
King of the Park
Soft glow backlights against the fog
Long after all are gone, he is aware
King writes in his log...
There are none who dare
He is armed with full loads of nine
His body muscled, two-forty-one
Unsullied by garbage, it shines
Clean as the steel of his guns
Closing up shop, picks up his game
King of the Park, he is "Black Death"
Chess is what made his name
And those orders... on his breath
One word from his lips, seals the fate
All pay the rent, the fee to live
Only warned once, don't be late
He loves the beatings he gives
Lost in the morrow's night
Silence almost not in hearing
Wait! Too quiet...Something ain't right
The sense of danger nearing
Contempt for the fool! " I reign supreme"
Trained by Uncle Sam's best
"I am meanest of mean"
Six campaigns on his bullet-proof-vest
Still it is so eerie, reminds him somehow
A crossbow bolt whispered his ear
A jungle night in Dhou Chow
The black void came so near
No satisfaction is ever made
Anonymous done, no intimation, meant to intimidate
That is the odor in the air... afraid
Only now he elucidates
Spinning 'round, crouching low, taking cover
Empty stomach, feeling of dread
The reach of fingers..."Holy Mother..."
Who's there? Ohhhh...You're dead!
Twin streams of fire, and flashes of blue
Here eat this, monster remembered
You fool, you fool, you fool...?
He looks at a hand dismembered
Smoking steel falls empty and bare
Pain made of no concern, his will you see
You? You dare to dare?
Ahhhh, it's all too funny
Crushing force meets beautiful body now
Surprise struggles to the fore
The King doesn't understand how
Killer is so much more
Vision of little ghost-man
Comes once again in the night
There is no way he can
This one...Bring him this fight
Bared teeth, animalistic attack
Arms strain, broken, bloody stumps
No sounds from throat, savaged slashed
Killer's here, from down in the dumps
The dawn breaks, all glassy-eyed
Word on the street, The King is dead
Bloody pools darkly, reflect the sky
Now Killer is the name to dread....
Who? .....Killer...
Critiques
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Sir Gee
hardcorechick28
16 years 7 months ago
wow.....
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Don't underestimate...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
coming to my neighborhood