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greeneyes
greeneyes
Nov 04, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Legend of a King

shining hilt beckons
Young and unsure, he comes forth
a legend begins
— greeneyes, Nov 04, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

You are a legend

Kaboom. Well done and quite lovely in fact. Lady Elizabeth, this is another treasure. Typo, 1 n in shining, sorry, gotta be perfect. Love this write. Love to you and yours. Lyz. XX
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

Lyz

Thanks for notcing the typo! I fixed it. love, Elizabeth
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 7 months ago

The Katana comes forth...

You have come up with an elegant japanese swashbuckling tale... and drawn excaliber, caliburn and it katana kin out in unison. You blended the tale so very well in so few a words with this style yet like the gleaming edge of a newly whetstoned blade... you cause a thousand cuts of awe across my mind and heart! Yet let your legends and myths sprout forth from your inkpot... and forever etch our minds and blades with magicial stories and mythical runes to spellbind us all... Are you secretly Morgana in disguise???? She had green eyes you know! Brilliants stuff! Dale :)
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

how did you know?

Dale, Thank you for commenting on my poem.Oh, and yes, you found me out, I am Morgana! Love, Elizabeth