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Evolution of Love

That feeling of eternal desire
Love has waited but all too long
Time will now cease for a moment
None more important than his Love

She is present in human form
Her origin unknown to all but One
One does search for her on Earth
His pain is his need of her being

A tainted kiss of Raspberry disaster
Floods of ebony love flowing freely
This union blessed by none but them
All who see cannot understand

Their prodginy gifted with supreme abnormality
Love abundant with speed to deliver
Tipping of the scales has but begun
Compassion gives way to understanding

The immortal launch to the final destination
Origin come forth and claim you way
To you now oh my One
And peace now at last


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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

The journey of One leads to

The journey of One leads to bliss. Peace & Love for all time's sake. Hook up with her while you can. ;-) ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Stuart

I agree with Anna hook up while you can and this ones wonderful my friend I really love it ... Love and hugs Jayne x x
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

Glad you like it

Glad you like it Jayne,.....now where did I put that girl...no not there lol...hmm maybe under there..no nothing there....LOL best regards Stu
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Stu

Lose an s and add a p in Raspberry. This is a really good write and i enjoyed searching with you. An Angel in disguise. Any way, a beautiful love poem. At peace at last, lovely. Love from Lyz. XX
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Hey Stu

Well done. Love Lyz. XX
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Loved it

Came back three times now to comment..yep I agree with Lyz about the raspbery ...it was rasping on my tongue each time I read this. I loved it Stuart Seabhac
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 6 months ago

Thankyou Seabhac, I have

Thankyou Seabhac, I have corrected the abnormal Raspberry now and all is well lol Thanks very much for the comment Best regards Stu