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Happy Endings, Lulliby For My Daughter

I  love happy endings,they fill my heart with joy
Who was not thrilled when Pininocio  became a boy
Cinderella's slavery ended when the slipper went on her foot
Soon a wedding dress would replace her rags all full of soot
Snow White awoke from death, with the touch of true loves kiss
When she opened her eyes a last, it filled me up with bliss
Dorothy went over the rainbow,hoping happiness she would find
Realizing her salvation, was in the world she left behind
Beauty was able to look into the beast, and love his soul within
And lets not forget the happiest ending of all, Jesus saving the world from sin
Yes I believe in happy endings, I hope that you do too
If you close your eyes, and dream my love, there is one that waits for you

— greeneyes, Nov 03, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Oh I love this poem Green

Oh I love this poem Green Eyes.... you have seen into the heart of fable and the happy endings that are truly beginnings. Hugs, Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

You have blown us a fairytale kiss as well, thank you so much for this beautiful write I really enjoyed it Love and hugs Jayne x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Lovely lullaby

Oh simply lovely Greeneyes, lovely and uncomplicated, positive and happy and I feel that you too will have many happy times, and many good friends you give out your love of such yourself and create an atmosphere worthy of any of the happy endings you mention. Love Ann of Norway
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Oh dear Lady of the Fairytale

You are such a beautiful story teller and this is a happy ending poem. Your writes are always a joy to read and I love them all. More please. Lov Lyz. XX
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

Ann and Lyz,

Ann and Lyz, Nothing lifts my heart and spirits like comments from the two of you. Thank you. Elizabeth