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In Wondering When

I’m wondering when
next time we meet,
what form we’ll take
in the next heartbeat

Will we be the rays
that blaze from the sun,
or could we be sprays
from when time begun

Maybe as nightingales
we’ll sing to the moon,
or maybe as wolves
we’ll sing our own tune

Would that we shifted
dimensions and time,
maybe our hearts
would beat the same rhyme

Maybe as echos
through deserts vast,
or maybe a comet
that moseys on past

Will we be leaves
that glisten the trees,
or will we be wind
that blows to the seas

Whatever we will be
and wherever we become,
set our spirit free
we are one anthem

— Seren, Nov 02, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Critiques

greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

Beautiful!

Jayne, you seem to write without any difficulty at all. You make it look so easy. This was just beautiful. Love, elizabeth
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

I can honesty say this time that write was writen from the same stroke that started it all the way to the finish ..I couldnt stop sometimes its like I am possessed and just write freeflow and see what happens its fun but can be funny sometimes ... ;) love and biggest hugs Jayne x x
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Jayne

When I wrote this comment I was unaware of what was going on, you will remain in my heart and prayers. Love, Elizabeth
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Awww its ok Elizabeth most

Awww its ok Elizabeth most people knew I have been sick most of the time I have been here but as you would understand huni I dont want sympathy votes ... just a nice comment like yours makes me smile :) but I am not gone just yet gotta get some test results and things first but well see how it goes ... love and big hugs Jayne And huni you take it easy I raised my kids on my own forever I know how hard that job is (huggles)
SR

Stuart Reiss

16 years 7 months ago

Jayne….this one is my

Jayne....this one is my favourite of yours so far. Its a very lovely drifting write that takes me to a sacred place. Really really nice write.. Well done best regards Stu
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Stuart

LOL you know whats funny I didnt think it was any good and stuck it into a blog and then got bored today and put it in stream lol anyway thank you for your lovely comment ... its nice to know its touching anyone just one is all it takes ... love and biggest hugs Jayne x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Anthem. Jayne’s. Fits

Anthem. Jayne's. Fits perfectly into Leonard's. We all hear the same anthem, but we have to make it *Ours*. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5zKk76YkF1U Love, Ma "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Ma

I just went downt the comments and seen the link clicked ... holy shit ... it fits perfectly I can sing it in harmony along with it :O:O:O how did you notice that ??? Amazing ... You have just floored me lol ... and if you meant yours in the second last line to ours ?? I wondered the same thing ... love and biggest hugs Jaughter x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh you paint the picture of

Oh you paint the picture of eternity's beauty, the one only you could make into a paradise with your lovely worded poems, the place we could dream was true and in doing so we love you. Ann of Norway
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ann

Thank you for your kind words ...sorry to be late answering (hugs) love Jayne x x
L

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Yo Dear Empress

Here to do your bidding, lol. This is a lovely written piece and your wonderment of the beauty in which you may return as, you already are a part of it. As beautiful as this poem dear heart. love Lyz, XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

(hugs) thanks for the

(hugs) thanks for the comment and I am sorry for the lateness in answering ... Love Jayne x x x
KINGZOMBIE

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 7 months ago

Beautiful Write

I almost cant wait to see whats on the other side of deaths door, if its even half as beautiful as your description we will all be happy ...ZOMBIE
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

I am glad you said almost

I am glad you said almost ... sometimes I wonder if heavens not on earth ... shes a real beauty our planet ;) thanks for the kind words (hugs) Love Jayne x x
N

ngaioBeck

16 years 7 months ago

Wondering

Lots of "Heart".Excellent simile.
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Ngaio

I am so sorry for the delay in answering you my goodness didnt realise this comment was here thanks for the read glad you liked it ... love Jayne x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Troy

If you travel back in my catalogue of poems for about 2 pages you will find I wrote exclusively in rhyme ... but blank verse is my new forte and I am still learning ... every now and then I write a rhymer ... so keep your eyes open for them kind regards love Jayne-Chloe
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Big Smiles Troy … its ok I

Big Smiles Troy ... its ok I realise how many pages some of the poets here have and its mind boggling ...so fear not, i be not offended I will take a look at your blank verse your blog you say ??? Jayne-Chloe