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Nov 02, 2009
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In Wondering When
I’m wondering when
next time we meet,
what form we’ll take
in the next heartbeat
Will we be the rays
that blaze from the sun,
or could we be sprays
from when time begun
Maybe as nightingales
we’ll sing to the moon,
or maybe as wolves
we’ll sing our own tune
Would that we shifted
dimensions and time,
maybe our hearts
would beat the same rhyme
Maybe as echos
through deserts vast,
or maybe a comet
that moseys on past
Will we be leaves
that glisten the trees,
or will we be wind
that blows to the seas
Whatever we will be
and wherever we become,
set our spirit free
we are one anthem
— Seren, Nov 02, 2009
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greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
Beautiful!
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Awww its ok Elizabeth most
Stuart Reiss
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne….this one is my
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Stuart
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Anthem. Jayne’s. Fits
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Ma
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Oh you paint the picture of
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Yo Dear Empress
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
(hugs) thanks for the
KINGZOMBIE
16 years 7 months ago
Beautiful Write
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
I am glad you said almost
ngaioBeck
16 years 7 months ago
Wondering
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Ngaio
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Troy
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Big Smiles Troy … its ok I