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Medea

Medea emerged from the plane
Greece to London
she had left him
her brother, dead
torn to pieces
with the scattered remains
of her children
her lover a nameless
suicide
and she a new face
in the scientific age

She exhaled smoke
and drew a breath
once virgin slopes
formed the subtle distortion
of a smile
in some diseased animal
fashion

In her time she had known
sciences so profound
they were lost on the minds
of mere human creatures
every age wishes itself
to be remembered in time

As the age of love
every age has its lovers
an Adam willing to die for his Eve
and she not the least of them
now with a cancer
her dark beauty fading
the old sciences were losing touch
with the world
soon she would die
she does not wish to be remembered
but her sin and her love
has marked a page in history
and her name bound to her
like a brand crackling through flesh

The treachery of her love
the richest form of jealousy
she whispers: "Murder is
the shadow of love
and sex the secret
which binds lovers together"















— Dalton, Nov 02, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dalton

I think it is wonderful. You are a very talented writer. Your poem is a very well written, content is a little sad of life, love and death and I think it is a wonderful poem. Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years ago

Hello John...

I just had to stop by to say; this is gorgeous! A stunning and darkly enchanting poem. Exquisite work John. With my love, Raven-Shakti
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Raven

Thankyou for your kind words Raven. I had alot of pleasure with this one, even though it is quite sad. I liked that it was the perfect philtre for discussing such concepts as dying arts, the old sciences of the witches and shaman of these ancient lands. As you may know the shaman were all but driven to extinction, like the Druids before them, in these lands. Whenever you are in a forest in Ireland, Wales, Scotland, England, Cornwall you are standing where a Druid once stood. And I know how you love the forests. Thankyou for the kindness you have showed me, john
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

WoW John!

As soon as I read the first stanza I was hooked. Very powerful. The images you created, and excellent write, had my hair standing on edge. Dark, but wonderful the way you captured my imagination and horror. Rosina xena465
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Dalton

16 years ago

thankyous to all. i don’t

thankyous to all. i don't know if i deserve five stars. this is an old one, i am trying (with some small success) to deviate from my normal comfort zone of romantic love poems. i want to evolve as a writer, all of your opinions will help me do this. thankyou for your praise I only hope i can do it justice. love john
Gardenia

Gardenia

16 years ago

Medea

Hi there. honestly, if there is a story that i love most in the world...that would be the beauty and perfection of tragedy. Speaking of history, it seems that nowadays we've known her as a cruel villain, an evil witch...but u made her a woman who made herself evil for the sake of love-another victim of Eros's arrow. My first reaction after reading this is sympathy towards Medea and hate towards "love". Medea lives among us now right? I love your poem! here goes my "go for it" smiley...^_^ Gardenia *the flower that blooms when Heaven cries*
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Dalton

16 years ago

thanks muchly for your kind

thanks muchly for your kind words. if you like this one maybe you will like: "Cyclops - words upon waking from a dream" something of a recurring theme. john
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amalzamani

16 years ago

yours or hers?

I read a bit about Medea @ Wiki so glad she's just a myth :) now the last quote is yours or hers?
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear John

Could have sworn I left a message here ... better late than never smile love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")