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Staggered Lanes

Staggered Lanes



Upon a wind-swept winter field
where frost now covers summer yield,
the solstice glints on sun-iced crust
where once such range was full, robust
and filled with crop and pride revealed.

Harsh bleakness blusters wintry realm
and frosted cold holds tight to helm
while hands of winter mark her stead
as if the day bled branded dead
disguised as such to overwhelm.

Yet here beneath this frozen soil
wrapped waiting for the spring in coil
lie shoots and sprouts of tender green
expecting birth where they'll be seen
as harvest reaped from labor's toil.

When farmer's plow pushed on to till
the season's frost released its chill
from warming earth, each mounded rise
where rules held rules; no compromise
for staggered lanes, seeded with skill.

Showing me paths as it saw fit,
cycles of life, where I submit,
whose trace of seasons on my brow
have grayed the locks that I wear now
and leave me cause to ponder it.








 
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Nov 02, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Robert Louis Stevenson, William Butler Yeats, John Keats, Pablo Neruda, Algernon Charles Swinburne, T.S. Elliott, and too many more to begin to cover them all.

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Pamela

This is a beautiful write. I see you are a natures girl. Is plow supposed to be spelled plough? I know we sometimes have different spellings like we spell color, colour. Any way, this is really good. Love to you and yours. Lyz. XX
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

I am very pleased for your comment on this piece. Yes, I love nature and all it has to offer. Some of my most beautiful days have been spent quietly enjoying the outdoors. I hope you found a moment to view Frost's "Ghost House" as well, and to add, as in the various spellings of words, the American spelling of "plough" is "plow", so this is correct at it stands. Thank you again for your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. ~Pamela
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Well you are welcome

I enjoyed your poem very much and thanks for the spell check, lol. Love to you from me. XX
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh have you roots in English

Oh have you roots in English soil, it is as if I hear the ancient bards of that fair land chanting their words to the earth. And the sensations of the seasons are truly felt and recorded with such a poetry that I am home there in these words, and feel a longing for their scents and breath of winds. So rich that scent of ploughed earth, and with your rhythm fitting its cycles we are carried along on your old cart the horses helping out, the weather ever changing giving water and sun enough to ripen every seed those stubble roads along, the birds their song beside and this your farmer's pride. Very nice dear Pamela where are your roots? Love from Ann of Norway.
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

You are a beautiful soul...

I thank you so much. You are a beautiful soul with a comment/response more poetic than the verse itself. My roots are American heralding from the cold northern Minnesota earth with heritage that brought my ancestry from Sweden and Finland. Thank you so much for such a glowing response. One cannot ask for more. Thank you again. ~Pamela
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

That's what you inspired in me with your poem

That's what you inspired in me with your poem, and we are also here to be inspired by each other, and not only did you inspire me but you showed me your sensitivity to nature and this always makes me feel happy to know you, and to dance with you along the lanes of life, that's so lovely to feel isn't it? From Sweden and Finland close to me here and close in atmosphere too,' det er hyggelig ä ble kjent med deg' = it is good to know you Pamela. I had a poetic aunt Pamela but I didn't know her well, now you can be a poetic soul who gives me the right sympathies with the family of all peoples. May your garden bloom, be it your natural garden or the garden of your mind, love from Ann of Norway