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Nov 01, 2009
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Our Gazes', Integrity
Catching the molecular prisims
as the sun dances across your face;
in the morning dawn's haze.
I'm caught pretending that I have focus, enough
to distinguish them from the shadows
in my mind's eye.
I receive the grace within you
way down deep, to the level of my very core;
and I celebrate.
Were it not, for my lack of focus
I might reign my voice too loudly,
so, I digress.
And were it not also, for the blinding echo
of the aura, that is your vessle...
I'd know not, of humility;
so, for now and for always
I will proudly celebrate thee,
and your gentle grace;
where we each easily coincide
and keep things so, very real between us,
face to face.
The sunset of our smile resembles quick, the dawn...
and the in-between times echo every reflection
and much, is our gazes', integrity.
as the sun dances across your face;
in the morning dawn's haze.
I'm caught pretending that I have focus, enough
to distinguish them from the shadows
in my mind's eye.
I receive the grace within you
way down deep, to the level of my very core;
and I celebrate.
Were it not, for my lack of focus
I might reign my voice too loudly,
so, I digress.
And were it not also, for the blinding echo
of the aura, that is your vessle...
I'd know not, of humility;
so, for now and for always
I will proudly celebrate thee,
and your gentle grace;
where we each easily coincide
and keep things so, very real between us,
face to face.
The sunset of our smile resembles quick, the dawn...
and the in-between times echo every reflection
and much, is our gazes', integrity.
— docmaverick, Nov 01, 2009
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raskin
16 years 7 months ago
lovely
docmaverick
16 years 7 months ago
You are one of few words, my friend....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 7 months ago
your short story