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Entry "Halloween 2009" Killer

New night flows into now
Vision sharpens and clarifies
Joy fills my senses
I am alive!

Untold awakenings, daylight sleep
Memories unbidden, claim my foremost mind
Niggle and nibbles of worry
Maybe I could have...

Maybe I should have...
It might have helped?
Growing inside me
Outrageous Rage!

No Matter
My course is set
Numbness
Only Rage matters

Sometimes...
I stay my hand
Sometimes my heart melts
Sometimes...

                        Killer
— Geezer, Nov 01, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Wow this is strong medicine for yourself.

Sir Geezer, I give you a red ribbon of medal dangling splendour for this little expound of heavy metal. "New night flows into now Vision sharpens and clarifies"........... I loved this focussing of the eyes. "Memories unbidden, claim my foremost mind Niggle and nibbles of worry"................................oooo lovely niggles and nibbles. I think you are in full 'vigeur' yet again and will storm the Noepoets battlements with yet more blazing, clashing shining armoured displays of prowess, welcome back from your dark ages of sickness in to the light of the hour. And happy November 1st 2009. Your Queen is pleased and loves this work. Ann of Norway.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Strong Meds...

Thank you O'Queen, I was a little concerned, that maybe he had revealed too much, and made himself too human. I am estatic that you approve! I thought long and hard, to be sure. It took me longer to decide, than it did to write! Thank you, much. Your ever faithful knight, ~ Sir Gee
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Gee

Even Killers ponder, lol, and yes I did miss his next victims, just a little,lol. I am glad of the new wellness of both since the Killer Flu saga and now he is healthy enough to ponder on his next. lol. I did enjoy it, and yes dear man, insightful but not enough to reveal too much. Good one, finally got to it, lol. Love to all Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Knight of Galants

Killer is on the verge of tipping I am thinking ;) and I wish I was going to be around to see his little dummy spit when it happens, you will have to email me all the editions of killer so I dont miss out (huggles) Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
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hardcorechick28

16 years 7 months ago

this one makes....

Killer seem more like a human instead of a monster, but isnt that true of all of us??? We all have a human side, some show it more clearly then others. The rest hide it for whatever reason until that certain someone draws it out of them. Perhaps Killer is in need of a companion...I know of a certain two that might be interested in working both sides of Killer.