Who knows how the world is twisted

Be still my gentle heart, made...roughly so. Praise. In the Light, Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

And you have written this with love. A lovely poem that I could give no justice with words. Beautiful and it bought tears to my eyes. Best wishes and love to you. XX Lyz.

What a wonderful poem, it's so delicate and full of love. The images are beautiful, and I could clearly see the stars, the little small dots that climb steplessly to the sky. Excellent poem, my dear friend O. Molly! Sincerely, Hugo

A beautiful expression of love Molly. My favourite lines were that we were nailed to the vaults of earth with billions of bright celestial bodies It gives a sense of just how minuscule we are on this tiny planet of ours Somehow how insignificant ....until we hold hands together Seabhac

Beautiful write Molly ... its all been said before me much more eloquently ... love and hugs Jayne x x

Oh mind blazingly beautiful this is my Swedish goddess of the skies how can we bring ourselves to leave it? Sä vakkert, sä vakkert. Love from Ann.

Reading your piece helps me know I'm in the right (write) place :-0>, and that I have so much to learn. I love the expression of love, friendship and togetherness. Suddenly a big mean world isn't so scary. Very nice work.

Molly, With such heartfelt words that transgress any relationship... be it friends, lovers or family you have the unique way and bond that connects us all to the rest of humanity. Between each glitter laden star is vast pit of blackness that must be ventured and with great balance and careful tread you skip joyfully between each star in this world and add extra sparkle to everyone. You get sucha feeling of togetherness and companionship in this piece... and it is to die for. So very, very good Molly! Hope all is well in your part of the world! Dale :)

As usual your imagery and substance are very evocative You don't need anymore praise I would think, as your talent is uncontestable. What you do need is to consider your structure carefully. There are never absolutes in this regard but it would from my view be more balanced in the detail of the imagery from a readers perspective - if say line 1 joined 2&3. I know your intention in leaving the line " It can be so " separate. In doing so you give it that extra prominance that backdrops the rest of the poem.But For my enjoyment of the reading I prefer more connection to the following lines as this creates less of that "joint" of thoughts. Regardless of how you choose to construct it the work is beautifly crafted. .........o

I really loved it, and now it has come back and I can look at it again, what intrigues me so much about your poetry is the paceing, when I read your work I seem to fall into step with its rythmn so easily, so effortlessly, that I sometimes wonder if I'm ever coming back. love. Craig

This is extremely beautiful. A first class poem!

You throw us into the black abyss, into the space around, above, behind, and in our thoughts held fast the hand of one we love, what, ponders one is space but place too, not empty yet not solid to our gaze the earth oscillating on its axis slightly off centre as it is, they say, may well be tangible and yet it is of elements in tiny pieces 'sammensatt' glued and spewed from out of giant explosions, bombarded with meteorites which, with those from the moon clothed our globe so beautiful, with life giving chemicals whose actions and reactions became us and we all hold hands because we are of the same substances born. How wonderful how wonderful it all is. And you reflect that wonder in this poem. Isn't it Molly? Kjaerlig hilsen fra Ann