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A Vision in the Rain
As the branches fall away
and the night has cast her spell,
as my form is disappearing
and I sink into inkwells
A campfire is burning down
cooling embers warm my mind,
and within this wordless vessel
empty hollows can’t hold rhyme
I wondered what to do
till the fire was my friend,
And then it finally hit me
that I’ll never write again
And all the wordless poems
drifting without names,
now none will ever be written
my passion lost its flame
Those silly little rages
that roared around my head,
snuffed out all my dreams
my visions now lay dead
But when I brushed the stars
as I sometimes did,
I gasped in awe and wonder
as my head was hung and hid
This magic that was shared
and seared within my veins,
will live among my memories
as burning scores to stain
I will miss your gentle missives
sent throughout the night,
I will miss the love and friendship,
that glowed within the lights
And it’s always at the last
my heart does pause in pain,
but with all my being I love you
may we meet inside the rain
Always look for a Tail
that curls around the moon,
know that its my message
and I’m spinning round the room
Adieu and goodbye
are words I cannot say,
maybe I shall save them
until my dying day
Until a magic rainbow
calls me from stalled time,
my word waits in the grotto
I’ve built within my mind…
And now I have to go
with gentleness,no pain,
knowing that I’ll see you
as Rainbows Bloom Again.
Critiques
hugo la rosa
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Jayne:
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
My Dear Friend Hugo
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
If ever a poem of yours has
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ma
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Big Sis
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
I join you in sheets of
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Awwww dont cry huni … I
seabhac
16 years 7 months ago
Across the world to you
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
My Dear Friend Liz
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
You are an orchestra in my
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
And don’t think you’re
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ma
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Help!
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Gee
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Oh now it is I who am speechless.
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ann
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hey Aunty Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Nana
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Empress O f the Pen
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Empress of the Pen
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
I will bring the tissues
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
LOL … unfortunately I am
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Well I hate to say
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Nana
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Yay
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
LMFAOOOOOOOOO…. so if I
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Well Well
hardcorechick28
16 years 7 months ago
i stink
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
I dont do goodbye darlin …
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
I cant believe it.........
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Fingers crossed the news is
Tony Udo
16 years 7 months ago
Rain
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16 years 7 months ago
Dear Tony