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Oct 31, 2009
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The Garden in a Ghetto
The Garden in a Ghetto
I found pebbles
tiny pinched trails
trenched in shifted sand;
each roll a wish,
a dream,
a reminder
of planted seed
and hope for more.
Pride masked
liquid pools
in lifted eyes.
Yet, such faded stare
grieved the unachieved;
knew fruition
would have been seized
but for water restrictions
stuffed beneath bureaucracy
grouped behind numbers
and social abnormality.
Blooms are sparse
in an untended garden.
Soil retaliates
as my tiny spade
feathers top layers,
begins to accommodate loosened laminate,
gently nourishes
and softens calloused edges.
Eyes embrace equilibrium
while traces of rolled rock,
rounded, smoothed -
take hold
and ripple water with quiet anticipation.
I found pebbles
tiny pinched trails
trenched in shifted sand;
each roll a wish,
a dream,
a reminder
of planted seed
and hope for more.
Pride masked
liquid pools
in lifted eyes.
Yet, such faded stare
grieved the unachieved;
knew fruition
would have been seized
but for water restrictions
stuffed beneath bureaucracy
grouped behind numbers
and social abnormality.
Blooms are sparse
in an untended garden.
Soil retaliates
as my tiny spade
feathers top layers,
begins to accommodate loosened laminate,
gently nourishes
and softens calloused edges.
Eyes embrace equilibrium
while traces of rolled rock,
rounded, smoothed -
take hold
and ripple water with quiet anticipation.
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Oct 31, 2009
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
So many layers of truth
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Water
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you