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The Garden in a Ghetto

The Garden in a Ghetto



I found pebbles

tiny pinched trails
trenched in shifted sand;

each roll a wish,
a dream,

a reminder
of planted seed
and hope for more.

          Pride masked
          liquid pools
          in lifted eyes.


Yet, such faded stare
    grieved the unachieved;
          knew fruition
              would have been seized
but for water restrictions
    stuffed beneath bureaucracy
          grouped behind numbers
              and social abnormality.


Blooms are sparse
in an untended garden.

Soil retaliates
as my tiny spade
feathers top layers,

begins to accommodate loosened laminate,

gently nourishes
and softens calloused edges.

Eyes embrace equilibrium
while traces of rolled rock,
 
rounded, smoothed -

take hold
and ripple water with quiet anticipation.



— Pamela A. Lamppa, Oct 31, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Robert Louis Stevenson, William Butler Yeats, John Keats, Pablo Neruda, Algernon Charles Swinburne, T.S. Elliott, and too many more to begin to cover them all.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

So many layers of truth

So many layers of truth here, Pamela. I love your poetry. Light and Love, Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

There are many layers to this metaphor - We are all bound by limitations, those we place on ourselves and those placed on us by society - some more so than others. I appreciate your kind words so much. Thank you. ~Pamela
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Water

A precious liquid gold, as is all nature. Good piece here, lots of layers as Anna said. Lyz. Xx
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

Thank you for your interesting comment and star rating. This metaphor does indeed reveal many layers. We are all bound by limitations; those we place on ourselves and those placed on us by society. I appreciate you taking a moment to read and leave your thoughts. Thank you.~Pamela