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adjei agyei-baah
Oct 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Wild Fantasy

I've always pictured you lying in my eden low
The world utopian in a motion slow
What a billion kisses to make you glow
In order to surpass a Shakespearen show!

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

"Wild Fantasy" is a good title, it drew me in. Nice job in rhyming. Always, Cat
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 6 months ago

thanks for reading

Hi Cat, thanks for your time spent on my piece.it been always nice to hear from people like you.I was away for a while and hence the delay in replying.You are appreciated.
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

wild fantasy

hello the title is very good and i to like the rhyming nicely done ,,,,,ziggy
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Ziggy

Hi Ziggy, thanks for your comment.I have also been enjoying you pieces too.Check my comment very soon.
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Adjei

Finally, I have arrived. I too loved the title, it drew me as well. I found your poem to be witty and clever. I may secretly have wished for mor, lol. No, well done. Love to you and yours, lyz. XX
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 4 months ago

witty and clever

Thanks once again for your lovely comments Lyz.Will definately give you more.We people like me are just new in this field are just towing the lines of the giants in this site.Don't want to mention names to inflame passions.Will give you a private messege when another is mounted.
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks buddy

Well done once again. Lyz. XX
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks for being an ardent

Thanks for being an ardent follower of my pieces.What kills a poet's writing instinct is to hear noone commenting on his work.thanks once again
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DimondDivinity

16 years 3 months ago

The title was wut pulled my

The title was wut pulled my attention but once i read i wanted more i wanted the poem to continue, what was there was very appealing to me and was hoping to read on!!!!