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I WAS sixty seven once

This pencil won't run out 

it flows onto the page

it may write things I like

it all depends

on whether the mind is feeling free

or whether its playing games with me

we'll surely see as we proceed

across and down the page

with words that suit my age

my own that is

an ageing dame of sixty seven 

trying hard to think of heaven

as my mind deteriorates

as slowly as it can

 

so far my memory's not bad

it isn't trained at all

I blame myself for being lazy

should have taught it more

and yet its what we're made of

our memory's our great big store

the larder of our food for thought

without it maybe life's a nought

so train it, train it, train it

that brain needs to remember

before life reaches December

to grab at straws and write some more

before, before, before

it is no more.

 

 


— Nordic cloud, Oct 30, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Ann … They tell us

Dearest Ann ... They tell us if you dont use it they say we loose it .... and thats so true with the mind I am only 40 and already I am forgetful, shocking actually I am hoping my continuing to write improves my brain span ? or pan ? lol hugs of love Jayne x x x Edit forgot your stars
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ann

Agree with Jayne, don't use it you loose it. Scary thought in itself, lol. We all can relate to this write and I can see there is no fear of you loosing it too soon. I hope I can say the same for me. Lol. Terrific write. Love Lyz. XX
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 7 months ago

Hello Anne

I love your treatise on your own version of ageing! You certaily "will not go yonder into yonder night" without a fight! Sounds like you're enjoying the journey, I wish you God's speed - not too slow or too fast! Nice write! Bonita j
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

'Mercy buckets' I'm not kicking the bucket yet

Mercy buckets I'm not kicking the bucket yet, not by a long chalk. Glad you found it a nice little thought, but its true we must keep the little grey cells a-dancing, everywhere in our beings, every aspect of life's dances and then we will be better prepared to fight if and when we need to. BRRRR I suddenly thought of this :-La grippe porcine- I like the French description don't you? Well it has gripped Norway in its muzzle and sent all people to the doctor for jabs of this and that, I have a mask and cotton loves to wear in the shops, and nearly two thousand have caught the 'svineinfluensa' in Southern Norway so far, something like 18 are dead oh not nice!!!! But we hope that it doesn't catch us here, I haven't got the jab yet, there wasn't enough for everyone and those over sixty were not SO Important!!!! So one is patient and doesn't go out in crowded places, and all that we have to be careful with, scary? I wrote a little bit today:- Oh the pigs are loose they romp about in Norway's pleasant land polluting our ease with disease La grippe porcine has taken lives and multiplied with many 'wives' it seems. Now nigh on two thousand lives are smitten with influenza's dread and more than 18 are dead! 'Tis nature she has never a care for how we fare she lives and loves and treats our lives all equals with the dust and flies all part of this fine crust the earth supports we must accept its doom the hour will come when we're are done or undone I should say when elements beyond our power carry all the sway and end the light of day. Then not a vice, a sound, a song can change their furious fates we helpless lie, we cannot cry oh save us, its too late; unless by chance there's one or two who make it to the skies in man made rockets fired into oblivion's bright eyes and there they'll be forever severed from their warm light womb circling round and round no beacon to lead on will they be gone, what will they think as to infinity they sink without a throng. Alone forever out in space like feathers in the wind embraced by great gaunt spaces with solar wind upon their faces elements so strange where even gold's no longer mint is only but a memory so faint will there be books of history or judgements in the brine where human's have left time behind on earth will they become a second birth? Glad you liked my poem Bonitaj Love Ann of Norway (69- next year 70!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Blimey, but we are as old/ or young as we feel!!! No?) YES.