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Oct 30, 2009
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I WAS sixty seven once
This pencil won't run out
it flows onto the page
it may write things I like
it all depends
on whether the mind is feeling free
or whether its playing games with me
we'll surely see as we proceed
across and down the page
with words that suit my age
my own that is
an ageing dame of sixty seven
trying hard to think of heaven
as my mind deteriorates
as slowly as it can
so far my memory's not bad
it isn't trained at all
I blame myself for being lazy
should have taught it more
and yet its what we're made of
our memory's our great big store
the larder of our food for thought
without it maybe life's a nought
so train it, train it, train it
that brain needs to remember
before life reaches December
to grab at straws and write some more
before, before, before
it is no more.
— Nordic cloud, Oct 30, 2009
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Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ann … They tell us
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Hello Anne
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
'Mercy buckets' I'm not kicking the bucket yet