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R.I.P till Someday Meets Forever
From all tomorrows
you've been erased,
and all of our sorrows
drip to your lovely face
A light that was lit with forever
as mornings hand past twelve,
left this plain with the ferryman
in forever your light does delve
At first a shocking numbness
gripped us to the bone,
knowing that in the night
your spirit had off and flown
As tendrils of soul reach heaven
St Peter shall answer the door,
showing the way to forever
in the lights of golden floors
A rainbow of confetti will shower
to celebrate you coming home,
and we on the earth forgive you
for wandering afar to roam
A slice of life has slipped away
and submerged in I Am's hold,
we will weep in your memory
our arms are gripped to fold
Fighting off that feeling
of emptiness inside,
remembrance is the key
to a place that calms the mind
----
Deep breath
When you come again
will it be as gentle breeze?,
or will it be as rolling waves
and in the splashing of the seas
Could a gentle lark
alight upon a tree,
singing with a soul fullness
as ether-ed wings spread free
And as the moon in night
will you shine upon our face,
and as the Savior holds
with your presence he is graced
,
And as I silently cry
till a body jitters and it shakes,
and I'm wondering why
it was your soul that he did take
Please save a pair of wings
stained in Neon hues,
we'll be the funniest Angels
and all of heaven will laugh blue
Its always at goodbye
that I startle like a doe,
but I will say we love you
till someday we meet aglow
So wait for me in tomorrow
with a sparkle in your eye,
I'll bring you news of home
and on neon wings we'll fly
And now I've said these words
I shall slowly fall apart,
knowing that your gone
is ripping at my heart
...............................................................Rip,till someday meets Forever
Critiques
CyberSpace
16 years 7 months ago
Just Beautiful baby Hugz
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks Bubba (huggles)
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
This love we all share is
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ma
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
It’s incredibly difficult
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
(((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))
KINGZOMBIE
16 years 7 months ago
Another great one
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear King,thank you so much
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest One
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Big Sis
Bosscombat
16 years 7 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Matty
yenti
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ian
yenti
16 years 7 months ago
Little Lady
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ian
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Our dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lyz
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Wont keep you long
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Heya Huni
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Such a tribute to the dead
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
I have to say Boni … this
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
I agree with Boni
ziggy
16 years 7 months ago
hi jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ziggy
hugo la rosa
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne:
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearesrt Hugo
pleiades
16 years 7 months ago
if i cast a critical eye
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear P