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Oct 30, 2009
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PSYCHO KILLER - Qu'est - ceque c'est?
He remembered older carschevies, buicks and plymouths -it tied in with his proclivity for lost parts. He saw himself lonely -stalking seedy, smoky, bars - downing wanton women, whiskey sours,despising country guitars. His memory recalledstraightening out wrinkled sheetshis face as etiolated,
as his virgin heart replete. Jim Morrison's LOVE HER MADLYstill reverberated in his headalthough he'd left not long ago -she already expatiated with the dead... "We've got tonight - who needs tomorrow?" Silver Bullet from Bob Sieger's band:he knew that's all there waswhy not take a stab? She was a common whorewho would give a damn,he brushed off fallen fibers,as if they were her future plans
BjR October 30, '09
etiolate: cause to become weakened or sickly, drain of colour or vigour; expatiate: to wonder around freely without restraint; proclivity: a bent, leaning, or fondness
as his virgin heart replete. Jim Morrison's LOVE HER MADLYstill reverberated in his headalthough he'd left not long ago -she already expatiated with the dead... "We've got tonight - who needs tomorrow?" Silver Bullet from Bob Sieger's band:he knew that's all there waswhy not take a stab? She was a common whorewho would give a damn,he brushed off fallen fibers,as if they were her future plans
BjR October 30, '09
etiolate: cause to become weakened or sickly, drain of colour or vigour; expatiate: to wonder around freely without restraint; proclivity: a bent, leaning, or fondness
— Bonitaj, Oct 30, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Whoa, baby! Killer poem!
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Hey Anna!
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Boni
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
nice to know
bjp
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Bonita,
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
THOUGHT FOR THE DAY...
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Bravo Boni this time there
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hi
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks for stopping by Liz!