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Oct 30, 2009
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Calm Knife Attack
my stomach knifed
my blood departs
I feel the beating
of my racing heart
the pain intensifies
and I drop to the floor
yet I refuse to cry
and acknowledge this war
my attacker towers over me
as I lie paralysed on the floor
while he contemplates my destiny
(C)2009 Lenny Gazbowski
my blood departs
I feel the beating
of my racing heart
the pain intensifies
and I drop to the floor
yet I refuse to cry
and acknowledge this war
my attacker towers over me
as I lie paralysed on the floor
while he contemplates my destiny
(C)2009 Lenny Gazbowski
— Lenny of Cohen, Oct 30, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
hello