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Oct 29, 2009
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A Vision So Tender
Anticipating arrival,
Lurking at the bend,
Longing for revival,
Ready for his ascend.
Upon the brow,
A bleary cerulean,
A scudding wow,
Laced with aluminum.
The sapphire haze,
Dealt glorious sight,
Clutched in a craze,
Stunned by delight.
Instant devotion,
To unsung splendor,
Oceans of emotion,
A vision so tender.
Beauty inexplicable,
Unworldy perfection,
Feelings admissable,
Truthful affection.
Torn from display,
As he flew on by,
A taste of dismay,
A tear in my eye,
Excitement in decay,
Retreating, I cry.
In sanctuary seeking,
In sorrow I crawled,
Stopped by an angel speaking,
I became enthralled.
My name is asked,
I turn; It's him,
And my heart's basked,
Since therein.
Lurking at the bend,
Longing for revival,
Ready for his ascend.
Upon the brow,
A bleary cerulean,
A scudding wow,
Laced with aluminum.
The sapphire haze,
Dealt glorious sight,
Clutched in a craze,
Stunned by delight.
Instant devotion,
To unsung splendor,
Oceans of emotion,
A vision so tender.
Beauty inexplicable,
Unworldy perfection,
Feelings admissable,
Truthful affection.
Torn from display,
As he flew on by,
A taste of dismay,
A tear in my eye,
Excitement in decay,
Retreating, I cry.
In sanctuary seeking,
In sorrow I crawled,
Stopped by an angel speaking,
I became enthralled.
My name is asked,
I turn; It's him,
And my heart's basked,
Since therein.
— Poetree, Oct 29, 2009
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greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
hi
Poetree
16 years 7 months ago
Wow!
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
welcome