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The Minstrel

The Minstrel

 

“My fellow pilgrim , rake the fire
Its light will let me play my lyre
This tune, of such a sweet delight
A ballad, sad, to ease this night....

My song tells of long time ago
When farmer kept both sword and bow
Close to his hand, for he must fight
When viking ships hove into sight.
(These Norsemen came to rape and pillage
Left naught but death and burning village).........

        A minstrel, tired of wandering
A troubador, he'd played for kings.
Was heading homeward to his wife,
No more for him the nomad life.

A chafing strap of mandolin
Caused him to rein his pony in
From vantage point took in the scene
Houses burning, women's screams
Local men all dead or dying,
Women, children, captive - crying.
 
The viking raiders, fifty men, 
Had headed North to kill again
His family home lay on that trail
But on fast horse they might prevail!
He rode the pony fast and hard,
But chance to be in time was marred
By pony's laming - slowing, slowing.
He ran the last mile, sick with knowing.
Arrived at his dear home to see
It all ablaze and bodies three.
His wife, her mother and his child.
His mind was shattered, senses wild
His screams and wails were heard till night
But all went quiet in pale moonlight.

They found his body the next day
Below the cliffs around the bay.
His mandolin, crushed by his side
Was swept away by ebbing tide

The dragon ships soon left the bay
But sailed no more than half a day
When frightful storm drove them aground
And each and every Viking drowned
In all the hellish thunder's din
Was heard a plaintive mandolin
Was this the wind blown by the moon?
Or ghostly troubador's last tune?

 

— Tam the Chanter, Oct 29, 2009

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Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 7 months ago

minstrel

I am always grateful for your comments, even if this work is a bit sad. thanks for taking the time to read it love Ian
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Hello Ian

I prefer to think the drowning Vikings, was the work of a ghostly troubadour's last tune. Thank you for the spellbinding story. Always, Cat
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ian...

Your Minstrel, is indeed sublime... A beautiful and melancholy song of a Bard. Exquisite poem, my dear Celt. Love, Raven
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ian, this is truly a

Dear Ian, this is truly a masterpiece. So much so that it evoked one of my all-time favourite movie's memory: Gladiator. You are a troubadour so fine in the Neopoet year 2009. ~A p.s. I thought I already replied to this when you first posted... Aiiii, I'll be glad when we have never servers. "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 7 months ago

minstrel

My ladies; Cat, Green Eyes and Anna, With Raven, too, round my pianer Try not to laugh as I plink on One - fingered tune, a marathon That would try any mortal's patience (attacked by the United Nations! ) But listen and you may just hear The opening notes of "Doh - a deer" Thanks for writing Ian
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 7 months ago

My home, welcome to Chanter

I send a welcome to the Chanter Hoping we can have good banter That you bide at my place a while Fine a ken oor talk, provokes a smile Have you ever seen greener land That you did come fae wan se bland A bet yer faimily are fair creast That west ye bide, and missin east.. Ken yon viking, horned heed and beard Wid be fricht, aye rinnin scaired If he wid meet wae, oor Rabbie's host Aye fine ye ken, a meant Shanter's ghost East is east, but west is best. Your poems crackin, really great. If you try and say my spelling is bad, i'll turn you into a toad. I was born in Crosshouse Kilmarnock, and lived there for twenty years. Moved to Stewarton living there with wife and sons, for twenty six years. Came to live in London nine years ago. Sorry to rant. As i said your poems terrific. Awe the best Roscoe..
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 7 months ago

Ayrshire

My soutar Roscoe, gallus buddy I now am Ayrshire domiciled Take woodland walks ( paths wet and muddy) Where river Ayr, in spate, runs wild As Burns' supper fan and poet I would appreciate your views On these few lines I humbly wrote To try to give the bard his dues RAB the RHYMER Let's drink a toast tae oor ain bard Our greatest man o’ letters Though some said he was too uncouth No university spoilt his youth And through his writings simple truths Shine clear - he has no betters. Robert Burns - an honest man Who bore an honest name Was working class, with dirty hands Ploughing, seeding poor farm lands While poems flowed free like hour-glass sands Each adding to his fame. Shakespeare’s great plays of kings and queens All leave our spirits flat Whilst Burns feeds man’s hungry mind With lines of verse in which you find A ray of hope for all mankind A man’s a man for a’ that! Rab died too young and none so great Has ever come along That’s why, each year, we celebrate His life and work: we congregate To take a dram for Rabbie’s sake And hear his poems and songs. So be upstanding, lift your glass And toast the Immortal Memory. A man whose fame will never die Whose name will live till seas gang dry Drink up, my friends, and so will I TAE RABBIE BURNS ! !
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ian

What a sad poem and like Cat I have a taste for revenge, I like to think his mandolin lead them to their death .... wonderful write ... I am sorry i missed it ... congrates on evolution love and hugs Jayne x x
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 7 months ago

the minstrel

Dear Jayne, Thanks for writing. The poem wasn't TOO sad, was it? At least he didn't get left with his mother-in-law! lol Kindest Regards Ian xx
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 7 months ago

short story

see if we have a similar sense of humour,try a short story of mine - cruise kindest regards Ian xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Big smile … its 1.33am ..

Big smile ... its 1.33am .. I was just about to go in search of something to read ... you provided thank you ... and yes I think we have LOL Love and hugs Jayne x x