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Oct 28, 2009
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Adam
The human race!
Is it a race?
What constitutes a race?
A challenge of worth, a cast of many, a prize?
Is it a race for humans or a rat race?
That's a question for the rats
And if it is a race, can it be won?
What honour could be so just?
What prize could befit one so gallant?
Surely not another race but celebration of the day
Is the prize a piece of cheese or just another maze?
What if the prize was what you wanted most!
Maybe a sur-prise for a knight so worthy
Is that an Angel in the morning light
I pray my eyes do not decieve
I cry i'm not mistaken
I think I've found my Eve
Love
Adam xxx
Is it a race?
What constitutes a race?
A challenge of worth, a cast of many, a prize?
Is it a race for humans or a rat race?
That's a question for the rats
And if it is a race, can it be won?
What honour could be so just?
What prize could befit one so gallant?
Surely not another race but celebration of the day
Is the prize a piece of cheese or just another maze?
What if the prize was what you wanted most!
Maybe a sur-prise for a knight so worthy
Is that an Angel in the morning light
I pray my eyes do not decieve
I cry i'm not mistaken
I think I've found my Eve
Love
Adam xxx
Comments
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Awwwww thats just too sweet
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Adam, oops, Stu. Lol