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Jack-O-Lantern Moon (Sonnet)

Oh, Jack-O-Lantern Moon sitting there with
big toothless grin watching the ripe corn die,
come up here old fool!  Know this: death is myth;
time passes; the end for men is a lie.
Seed just goes in the ground and rests awhile--
What say you of spring when it’s green all ‘round?
So ‘tis till graves open mile after mile--
Now, watch over the harvest in the ground
till you bow to morning, pale at the sun.
The higher you rise, the smaller you get.
At end of stars, it’s time for you to run.
Oh, fat pumpkin moon, it is a sure bet,
the yellow corn will spring back in the west.
It’s you, big fellow, who’s the short-term guest.
— deelilah, Oct 28, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

hey mate

Great write but one question, do you eat pumpkin? I just heard that in some countries it is only grown for pig food. I love a dry nutty yet sweet Jap or Blue pumpkin. Yum. Lol, back to your Jack o Lantern moon. Love the last line, it made me smile. This poem had a lot of description and I very much enjoyed, it is a great write for Halloween. Love to you all, Lyz. XX
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 7 months ago

I know you didn’t ask me,

I know you didn't ask me, but yes you can eat pumpkin. Roasted with butter pretty much makes any squash. Good cookie's and GREAT pie. Oh and I love pumpkin seeds roasted with butter and cinnamon. Yummy. So yes, very eatable! Cows and pigs like them to. Chickens as well.
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Deelilah

This is an awesome halloween write hun I really loved that ending superb lol ... And yeah we eat pumpkin here I make soup scones cakes piklets you name it lol and baked sweet pumpkin yummyyyyyy... jesus you lot have made me hungry its 3am LMAO and amazing I am never hungry lately deelilah awesome poem blame them they started talking food LOL love and hugs Jayne x x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello

I loved this Halloween write, especially the last line! My favorite pie is pumpkin and I love pumpkin pancakes! Now I'm hungry, too, LOL! Always, Cat
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 7 months ago

To my friends

Hi Julie, Lyz, Jayne, and Cat, So glad you enjoyed the Jack-o-lantern poem, and thank you for visiting. Reading your comments made me hungry too. I happened to read some fabulous sounding pumpkin recipes lately, some which I intend to try, especially now after reading your remarks. Here is one of them: A ROUGH RECIPE FOR A REALLY GOOD STUFFED PUMPKIN Makes 2 generous or 4 genteel servings 1 pumpkin, about 2 1/2 to 3 pounds 4 ounces stale bread, sliced thin, then cut into 1/2-inch chunks 4 ounces cheese, such as Gruyere, Swiss, Blue, Cheddar or a combination, cut into 1/2-inch chunks 2-4 cloves garlic (to taste), peeled, germ removed and coarsely chopped About 1/3 cup heavy cream Freshly grated nutmeg Salt and freshly ground black pepper Center a rack in the oven and preheat the oven to 350 degrees F. Either line a baking sheet with parchment or a silicone baking mat or find a Dutch oven that's the same diameter as the pumpkin. (If you bake the pumpkin in a casserole, it will keep its shape, but it will also stick to the casserole, so you'll have to serve it from the pot, which is a rustic, appealingly homey way to serve it. If you bake it on a sheet, you can present it free-standing, if it doesn't collapse in the oven. I was lucky this time, but when I make it again tonight with a larger pumpkin, I'm not going to push my luck - I'm going to put it in a Dutch oven.) Using a very sturdy knife, cut a cap off the top of the pumpkin. This isn't an easy job - I went around the top of the pumpkin with my knife at a 45-degree angle to get a nice size cap. Clear away any seeds and strings from the cap and hold it aside while you scoop out the seeds and filaments inside the pumpkin. (Hold onto this goop -- you can separate the seeds from the filaments and roast them.) Season the inside of the pumpkin with salt and pepper and put it on the sheet or in the casserole. Now you have a choice, you can either toss the bread, cheese and garlic together in a bowl, then pack it into the pumpkin, or you can alternate layers of bread and cheese and scatter the garlic here and there. (I mixed everything together.) Either way, the filling should go into the pumpkin and fill it well. You might have a little too much filling or you might need to add to it -- it's hard to give exact amounts. Season the cream with salt, pepper and several gratings of fresh nutmeg and pour the cream into the pumpkin. Again, you might have too much or too little. You don't want the ingredients to swim in cream, but you do want to get a feeling that they're moistened. Put the cap back in place and bake the pumpkin for about 2 hours -- check after 90 minutes -- or until everything inside the pumpkin is bubbly and the flesh of the pumpkin is tender enough to be pierced easily with the tip of a knife. I removed the cap during the last 20 minutes or so of baking so that the top could brown. As you can see, I cut the pumpkin into wedges, so we could cut a cube of pumpkin and have it with some of the stuffing, but you can also leave the pumpkin whole and use a big spoon to scoop out pumpkin and filling. You could even scrape the pumpkin into the filling and mix it all up. Caution: If you want to spoon out the pumpkin and the filling or try mixing it, you better bake the pumpkin in a casserole because you'll need to support the sides. Playing around: I think you could play around with the filling, adding bacon or ham, herbs (a little thyme might be nice) or nuts. If you make it, I hope you'll let me know what you did, how it came out and how you liked it. As Catherine said, the recipe is bound to evolve. It is, after all, a recipe-in-progress and having it be a communal recipe-in-progress can only make it better -- and more fun! If anyone trys this before me, let me know how it was. Always, Deelilah