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Oct 28, 2009
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Him
I can't find the words to explain,
This feeling so strong,
It's almost pain.
A poweful burning desire,
For him,
Burning,
Like a fire,
Burning and eating at my heart,
And it won't stop.
Infected by Cupid's dart,
It's all over, all in me,
In my mind,
Affecting my thinking,
In my legs,
I feel them shaking,
For him,
When I see him.
He doesn't know what he's doing to me,
I feel like I'm going crazy,
For him.
I think he knows something,
By the way I look at him,
Stunned by him.
But he'll never know my true feelings,
Powerful and overwhelming,
And it's sad,
Really sad,
Makes me sad.
And I'm forever left longing,
Hoping,
Pining,
Praying,
For him.
This feeling so strong,
It's almost pain.
A poweful burning desire,
For him,
Burning,
Like a fire,
Burning and eating at my heart,
And it won't stop.
Infected by Cupid's dart,
It's all over, all in me,
In my mind,
Affecting my thinking,
In my legs,
I feel them shaking,
For him,
When I see him.
He doesn't know what he's doing to me,
I feel like I'm going crazy,
For him.
I think he knows something,
By the way I look at him,
Stunned by him.
But he'll never know my true feelings,
Powerful and overwhelming,
And it's sad,
Really sad,
Makes me sad.
And I'm forever left longing,
Hoping,
Pining,
Praying,
For him.
— Poetree, Oct 28, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
hello
Poetree
16 years 7 months ago
Hi Cat,Thank you so much for
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
=0)
Poetree
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you
themoonman
16 years 7 months ago
Poetree...
Poetree
16 years 7 months ago
Hi