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Calliope
Oct 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Winter Retreat

Golden leaves of Autumn glow,
Falling gracefully to the ground,
Being,now,replaced by snow,
Blanketed by the pure white down,

With each fall and eddie of crystal bliss,
I stand in awe of Natures power,
Flakes light upon my face a kiss,
And Winters grace,does I,embower,

Enclosed, am I,in cold's embrace,
Wind whispers soothing comfort words,
With such a voice in this sweet place,
How can I miss the springtime birds,

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello Lacy

There is much to be said in favor of every season, much to be enjoyed, but the grass is always greener... Don't forget that there is a space, between the comma and the next word. Always, Cat
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Lacy

Vivid write and I enjoyed this a lot. Colorful too. I am a springtime girl, born in summer and would love to see the snow, lol. One day. Love Lyz, XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Lacy… You wrote

Dearest Lacy... You wrote that first stanza so stunningly I could see the golden leaves drifting to sway back and forward on their way to the ground ... this one is really special I loved it all huni love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x uh oh !! you just gave me an idea lol ... Ill get back to you
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

Winter Retreat

Lacy Just come across this whilst surfing Neo only to find that I recently have just written my last few poems have a similar content. This is stunningly beautiful my dear friend. always blue