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Dream Weaver

The Sand Man is here
Showering me with his dust
Bringing me sweet dreams
— greeneyes, Oct 28, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

dear Elizabeth

You are a weaver yourself dear girl, and may you forever have sweet dreams, as this poem has said. Love it. love to you and yours, Lyz. Xx
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

"Ver me o rovan o"

Don't know how to spell that but its a Gaelic lullaby which was my favourite my mother sang it every night and I too have sung it and watched children fall asleep hearing it. The tune is haunting too. Anni probably knows it. Perhaps it is on Youtube must see! I am never sure that the idea of sand goes with sleep, but of course it is metaphorical. But the dustiness, or sandiness of eyes shutting and hearing the sound of sand pouring and the great warm deserts of sand and the colour of sand all add to the sleep generating magic of sand and you must sleep well ass you have more fairy stories to tell tomorrow and we would fain hear more of them Greeneyes. Love and a lullaby from Ann.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

Ann

I love you so much! Thank you! Love, Elizabeth