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Oct 27, 2009
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This Question
I asked
this question
from my
point of view
hoping for
a suggestion
and an
added clue
I wanted
to say
and needed
to think
before the
close
of day
when my
mind goes
on the
blink
Dear Bernard Sumner
Q: "When I paint, I paint what I feel and not what I see...
But when I write ( poetry ) I write what I see and sometimes how I feel, does this apply to
you, if not, then how do you write???"
I told
myself to
not hold
my breath
will always
follow you
until my
blasted death
for this
mans answer
will definitely
not come
which will
leave me
forever numb...
this question
from my
point of view
hoping for
a suggestion
and an
added clue
I wanted
to say
and needed
to think
before the
close
of day
when my
mind goes
on the
blink
Dear Bernard Sumner
Q: "When I paint, I paint what I feel and not what I see...
But when I write ( poetry ) I write what I see and sometimes how I feel, does this apply to
you, if not, then how do you write???"
I told
myself to
not hold
my breath
will always
follow you
until my
blasted death
for this
mans answer
will definitely
not come
which will
leave me
forever numb...
Comments
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Darlin Fleur
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 6 months ago
Oh thanks my darling,
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
LMAO now I can be a spaz …
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 6 months ago
Excellent
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Fleur
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 6 months ago
Lyz, you can
Stuart Reiss
16 years 6 months ago
This was sooooo enjoyable in
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 6 months ago
Why thank you Stuart,
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
Definitely the wow factor, love this.
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 4 months ago
Oh my god!!!
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Another reason I’m glad
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 4 months ago
thank you Anna