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Spellderella's Song

In a ramshackel hut
High upon the highest hill
The Sorceress, Spellderella
Stirred a haunted brew

Singing as she conjured
Her past reborn
Visions of the peasant girl
Who was destined
For so much more
Swirled inside her ghostly stew

Once married
To an impossible man
Mother to a son
Who was just as bad
So she left them behind
To chase the wind

Now she enchants the gentlemen
With her song
Voice like honey
Dripping all morning long
Golden curls
Against fair skin
Eyes easy to get lost in

With the wave of her hand
She takes her next victim in
Making love to them
In her den

Sweet perfume
Intoxicates the room
 Tasting the salt
From their sweat-soaked skin
Breathing hard
She pleasures them again
Stringing them along
Like marionettes to her song
The visions fade like the moon

As night gives way to light
She is left alone to ponder
Til her next performance
Her cast of characters set
Spellderella sings on

— hardcorechick28, Oct 27, 2009

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Rett

Rett

16 years 7 months ago

Ohhhh my

Not only does this give way to wicked evil thoughts, but truly wicked doings. Leaves it open to whether she kills them or loves them to death. I like this. A few mispellings but really good. Respectfully, Rett: "You can fool some of the people all of the time, all of the people some of the time, but you can't fool all the people all the time" Abraham Lincoln..Now, if our government would really learn that.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Spiderella...

She sounds like someone Killer would like to know, Along with Demoana, the three of them could have some fun. Maybe do a threesome! Serial love! Party of three. Meals on wheels. She sounds a little more mature, to offset Demoana's youthful exuberance. Needful things, says Stephen King. Great job! I love it! More! ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 7 months ago

Serial Love......

Which one does Killer want first? Maybe both at the same time??? Definitely could make for an interesting story, one we will have to work on....There will be more from Spellderella. More from DeMona eventually. Glad you liked it.