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Sparrow



As tiny sparrow builds her nest
while gently weaving twig and twine
a home of sticks and heart is formed
as she renews within her spring.

She knows the quickening is near
and scurries to be well prepared
as she will raise her peeping young
until another season comes.

The linings from an old felt coat
are tatters pressed in fluttered wings
yet they will tell her newborn babes
soft stories from another time.

A time when lovers knew the air
and felt its breath in season's wealth;
a time when care to build a home
gave everything for love to live.

It came from elder's spoken words,
a wisdom that would weave such cloak
of woolen felt and crimson silk
made to embrace a new day's morn.

And on this morn the sun arose
with golden rays to break the night
and wrapped itself around each child
to hold the warmth in dawn's cool air.

It is this dawn where love recalls
the breath of seasons that return
when mankind cares for all that live
and finds his name in offering.

Life's gentle sway of mystery
finds happiness within its place
the simple circle we call life
from here to there and back again.

As rivers rush home to the sea
sweet sparrow sings what nature gave
love always is and shall remain
the roundness in her woven nest.

— Pamela A. Lamppa, Oct 27, 2009

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Region, Country: New England - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Robert Louis Stevenson, William Butler Yeats, John Keats, Pablo Neruda, Algernon Charles Swinburne, T.S. Elliott, and too many more to begin to cover them all.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Ahhh… the sparrow….the

Ahhh... the sparrow....the quickening..."the roundness of her woven nest". Thank you for *your perfect offering*. ~Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Hi Pamela,

I enjoyed both your theme and the musicality this piece draws from the consistent metre. I am deeply in awe of anyone who can make a chosen metre work, as I myself struggle very much with metre. Respectfully, ~Nina
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

I am so pleased you enjoyed this bit of blank verse. I love meter and rhyme but find free verse a challenge as well. Thank you again for such a kind comment. I appreciate it very much. ~Pamela
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh the charm of it Pamela

Oh the dear sparrow and you know him well, you have watched well and loved the little scavenger of human offerings. He/she is one who sings in every town, from under the eaves of houses, the morning is not morning without his pleasant chirp, cheep, cheep ,cheep, and day has just begun and we are happy that he's there, so long? He is threatened too like all of us! Very nice poem, I love bird too. There are more magpies than sparrows here on the outskirts of Oslo. Yours and welcome from Ann of Norway
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

I am so pleased for your lovely and most wonderful comment. I am glad you enjoyed this. The day truly has, just begun. You are kind with your words and they are most appreciated. Thank you. ~Pamela