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Oct 27, 2009
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Hyperbolic Hell
When every anal flagellant
has crept forth from his cell
to elegize the Devil's eyes
and wish emissions well
When all the dancing deviants
who idolize the fire
kiss and tell of innocence
corrupted by desire
Erotic fools will justify
the parting of their knees
by rotting demons as they clutch
the touch of lust's disease
Adoringly they'll speak in tongues
that tittilate their King
and sanctify his rigidness
with every song they sing
While unpenned verses testify
that wholesomeness is dead
the paragon of Purgatory
lifts his horned head
and all the vibrant virgins
who now pretend disgust
will soon devour greedily
the potion of his lust
C. Lon R. Bruso
has crept forth from his cell
to elegize the Devil's eyes
and wish emissions well
When all the dancing deviants
who idolize the fire
kiss and tell of innocence
corrupted by desire
Erotic fools will justify
the parting of their knees
by rotting demons as they clutch
the touch of lust's disease
Adoringly they'll speak in tongues
that tittilate their King
and sanctify his rigidness
with every song they sing
While unpenned verses testify
that wholesomeness is dead
the paragon of Purgatory
lifts his horned head
and all the vibrant virgins
who now pretend disgust
will soon devour greedily
the potion of his lust
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Oct 27, 2009
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Critiques
hugo la rosa
16 years 7 months ago
Hello, Lonnie:
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you Hugo!
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Hello
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Many Thanks, Cat!
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks Lyz!
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
I can't belive I almost missed this one!
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Many thanks dear Lady!
Hooded Stranger
16 years 7 months ago
Devilishly good!
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you!
themoonman
16 years 7 months ago
Lonnie...
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks so much, Richard!
poewriter58
16 years 7 months ago
Bear
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you, Love!
onemorning85
16 years 6 months ago
A good and bad comment
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Lonnie
orgami
16 years 3 months ago
the classic verse