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Picking up the Pieces
Clouds gathering dark and Smokey Grey
the lightning speeding to the ground,
heavy raindrops hitting like stones
the sound of thunder rolls around
The storm has settled in up above
the radio man says to stay inside,
the storm's the worst his ever seen
eleven people have already died
Flash floods have ravished the streets
and destroyed what stood in it's path,
the destruction that it has left behind
looked like the holocaust aftermath
Cars were carried from parking lots
people swept away amidst the rage,
houses lay where they once stood
like a book that has lost every page
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Picking Up The Pieces
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Brilliant
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
Hi, Mark here.. your
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Well described...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I should be whipped drawn
Electric Blue
15 years 11 months ago
Picking Up the Pieces