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greeneyes
greeneyes
Oct 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Black Cat

Lurking past she roams
Black as night with eyes bright green
My heart stops in fright
— greeneyes, Oct 27, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Very nicely done!

I'm not normally a fan of such short poetry, but this one stands out and says, "Read me, I'm worth it!"! Bravo!
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

Scared me. Lol. I had a cat stalk me once and when I turned it stopped and stared me down. Lol. Love it and I am still smiling. Love to you and yours. Lyz.. XX
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

lol

Thank you! Just thought I would put a little Halloween touch on things! Love, Elizabeth