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C
Calliope
Oct 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Wide Open

Falling upwards,
Standing down,
Silently screaming,
I make no sound,

Masks of truth,
Faces of lies,
Years of deception,
Slowly dies.....


Now i can see!
No illusion of light,
My vision so clear,
I gaze in delight,

What once was hidden,
Is now revealed,
Those blackened windows,
No longer sealed,

Thrown wide again,
To let in the breeze,
And blow my troubles,
To the seven seas,

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Lacy

And may the seas gobble them all up. Well I enjoyed this and it is quite good. Love to all, Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Lacy

This is a poem full of hope I see a new woman emerging tentatively but still moving forward ...I loved this winds of change type poem ... and the rhythm was divine ;) love and hugs Jayne x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Lacy

In this poem you sound like a new woman, with a new dream. It's nice to be reading one of your poems again! Always, Cat
C

Calliope

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you both

Im glad you both liked it ,and its so good to hear from you cat...if you both liked this one the one im posting tomorrow should be divine these first two were just testing the waters you can say,lol,at least i think this next one will be better,hope you all read,thanks a bunch LOve and hugs to all Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.