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Actaeon

Actaeon I am the hunter that you have heard stories of. I glimpsed a poem while she was bathing. Naked, she rose out of the water, From the foam of her own reflection. I saw her. Sight expanded to become sound. Sound expanded to become touch. Touch expanded to become taste. Taste expanded to become smell. I knew her this is a poem. And in this moment, Know that I could not give her to you, How I wanted to kill this sweeter butterfly And display her behind glass. God! We are murderers, aren't we? ~ She felt me watching her, And turned to look at me. "you were a butterfly once," her eyes said. Then, in her anger, She set my own words against me, And they hunted me down. REMEMBER THE COCOON all circled me WHERE snarled YOUR pinned me to the ground WINGS plowed my skin with his claws WERE wrenched flesh away from bone BROKEN howled over my body INTO whimpered HANDS pawed earth over me ~ When I am pinned And wriggling on the wall.....
— Diatom Shells, Oct 26, 2009

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Diatom Shells

As always a beautiful strong poem. Excellent write. Love to you and yours. Lyz. Xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Shells

I have been pinned against that wall ... My goodness I am tired but I have to give this one the critique it deserves .... there are depths in this one ... and I think where you have the letters in caps lock ... drop them down make them look for the message this one is wonderful ... dont give away the secret ... and you do whisper secrets in this one ... I can hear it ... and I am hesitant to say anymore in case I am reading more into than is there lol tired minds create illusions lol love and hugs Jayne x x got my nomination wonderful poem ... :)
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

seren....jayne

awe the secrets we women behold....you read into this perfectly...thanks for your nom. its a blessing to be able to read poems and write them if u know what I mean girly....-shells
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

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ooo I was in spotlight I wish I could have seen it thanks for telling me still using my phone browser this thing is like a dino lol...
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bjp

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Diatom Shells,

You are very creative in your use of language. This particular idea I have never see before. And it is a terrific idea. Shall we name it? Perhaps, the "Crossword Style" poem? Reading, I feel like I am watching a fencing match with thrusts and paries, reposte and remise, all mingled by the blur of moving parts. You have great talent! Brian
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

brian...

its always a joy to here from you friend. I am awake and feel refreshed I think I can't get away from my greek counterpart but its nice to stay just for a little while in the mysterious place I call subconcious. well goodbye for now deary, look forward to reading some poetry today! -shells
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Dalton

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Miss Shells

A most vivid read, compelled me to look up the greek myth in my encyclopedia. Again you have a fine grasp of the ancient stories of world culture. You are an exciting talent. I look forward to reading and rereading more of your work.To speak of that primordial essence where myth is created the dark land of the unconscious, the place where dreams are born. Respect Dalton.
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

hello dalton friend...

its funny because a lot of my poetry is deeply rooted in greek mythology. their stories and myths fascinate me greatly. so do other kinds of stories but definitely greek and biblical stories are number one maybe its the mysticism in them. thank you so much for reading into my work its nice to hear from all of you again. loves to all! -diatom shells
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

i am....

hitting the hay I will finish responding tomorrow. loves to u friends -shells
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Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Diatom Shells

congrats on a highly deserved spotlight! I drank in every word (as usual), and seeing this one in spotlight is a timely reminder that I still have to catch up on your Danae series. Yours, ~Nina
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

ink...nina...

it would be so nice of you to catch up on that series of mine it holds a special place in my heart. some of it can be a bit extreme but that's the way I like it, I probably was drag queen in another life lol or maybe the complete opposite something simple like a thistle. well im off to read now, thank you for your congrats it always feels nice to be in the spotlight a couple times in life. -diatom shellz
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

I love every word you have

I love every word you have written, write and will write. Can't say any more. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

annA....

your so sweet to me girly I wish we were neighbors I would be over your house all the time probably drinking tea from the teahouse and eating cookies...sweet cookies. love you -shells