Keep Us As One

Life is
a beautiful
but painful
commitment
why is
it that
so many
souls are
lost
by the
injustice
of others
we all
try to
succeed in
our
chosen fields
but obstacles
are placed
in our
paths constantly
art
is the only
way out
art
is
to
be adored
and
longingly loved
the only
thing that
will keep
us as
one...

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Comments

themoonman

16 years 6 months ago

Fleur...

You have hit the nail in the head with this one... I do so agree, as I'm sure many will... art is the only thing that keeps me sane, or at least a degree of it. Richard

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you Richard

Glad you liked it!! :)fleur

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Fleur

My dear friend how true these words are especially for me it was my music and writing thats got me through the last months with my sanity relatively intact lol and I loved your little moment of reflection ... beautifully done ... I feel theres another side of you coming out in word ... its wonderful (hugs) love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x through our art ... we change ourselves and the world ... quote:- me LOL ;)

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 6 months ago

Finally!!

I am now only just starting to get notifications (today) decided to revert back to my old gmail address, neopoet doesn't like my new one. It's like someone shining a torch in my dark little cave. I have felt like a lost sheep! And thankyou my darling, how are you?? Glad you liked it! :)))))))))fleur xxxxxxxxx

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

I am not to shabby at all

I am not to shabby at all feeling a little better this week ;) wooot ... I wont jinx myself and say the magic words but I am feeling a lot better the last two days ... (hugs) its damn good to see you round again I need Fleur fixes more often lol huggles and love Jayne x x x x