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They advise me

The advices I get

 

Some times I give away the impression

That perhaps I want

To make history overnight

Some say I am prolific

Others say stay out of sight.

 

Those who get angry at me

They want to return

They are so very kind to say

We’re sorry please continue

To write also for me

 

Some others want me to help

Change the thinking over here,

I really can’t do much

As many think of earning

More every year

 

But what are a few cents

Between friends

When we exchange common sense

When we exchange

What we are adept at

Then the world will accept

What I am out to do,

Share knowledge my friends

With all of you

 

The world is yours

Compare not me,

An ancient person

With yourself of modern generation

But share all that you know

From your knowledge alone

My mind does glow.

— loved, Oct 25, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello

Your title and theme are good, as is the language usage and the pacing. You have some lovely thoughts going here. My I suggest that you read the work of other poets on the site, and comment on their work. That way you will get to know us and we will become aware of your presence, and respond to you. Always, Cat
loved

loved

16 years 6 months ago

learning stage

i come here to share with u all my works when i am free from TRIOND shall do as u wish me to do