"Open Ocean's"

Her wet, long hair electrifys my skin, with every soft touch I shiver. Her salty sweat I taste in every tender bite.My breath heavy from a perfect storm. Her hips find tempo in the wet caressing wave's of the surf. Her nail's dig my skin, tickling my soul.Her emotion audible, like whispered song's from a wicked siren.Tiny explosion's rattled her quivering body. I float in lust only to drown in her seduction.Drifting in underwater currents into a warm, dark abyss, sinking in the deep oceans gift of peaceful death.

— KINGZOMBIE, Oct 25, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets: I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also, for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium, it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it, lol., " I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp, Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god, Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality, Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove, baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room, the bullgod has your head, and baby thats just fine, now it is time, we became the mighty cell, wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove, they say we've got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, baby, the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there, arms up overhead, a goddess in the ancient song, work that mighty world to the mindless groove, they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, they say weve got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello

actually, it's not that bad... I enjoyed it. Always, Cat

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

I'm glad you liked it, I just hope whoever pick's contest winner's doesn't. THANK'S again, maybe there's hope for me yet.