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Oct 24, 2009
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Back door note.
Take a plume
and paint your poemAutumn colours' heresweep the paths
and show the roots of treesthen let breezes
send the leaves
on wafted waving windsto land on lakes and stonesand decorate the foam of waterfalls
and grey back doors and dream.
Looking out at the view
there they were loaded,
all the birches,
those fairy-like trees
standing upright
in their myriads of golden yellows,
greens,
and so I took up my pen
and wrote this note,
the leaves inspired me,
swept and wafted onto lakes and stones
and foam
and waterfalls
to end up
on your back door
for you to receive
and dream.
Yes you.....all.
yes you.
and paint your poemAutumn colours' heresweep the paths
and show the roots of treesthen let breezes
send the leaves
on wafted waving windsto land on lakes and stonesand decorate the foam of waterfalls
and grey back doors and dream.
Looking out at the view
there they were loaded,
all the birches,
those fairy-like trees
standing upright
in their myriads of golden yellows,
greens,
and so I took up my pen
and wrote this note,
the leaves inspired me,
swept and wafted onto lakes and stones
and foam
and waterfalls
to end up
on your back door
for you to receive
and dream.
Yes you.....all.
yes you.
— Nordic cloud, Oct 24, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Yes it was just a note, how
themoonman
16 years 7 months ago
Ann...
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you too Moonman
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
decorate the foam of waterfalls
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
It would be fun to ride on a leaf.
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
slices
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann
paparazii
16 years 7 months ago
Lovely
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
You are such a sensitive poet yourself.
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
very, very sweet
ziggy
16 years 7 months ago
enda, patrick collins. hi
DawningDaytripper
16 years 7 months ago
Ann I loved it.
bjp
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Margaret Ann,