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Cherished in the Word(Edit)
I Gaze at the night
and black rivers flow by,
till a nebula falls
and I let out a sigh
Delving so deep
In the wonders of space,
is a peaceful way
to create an escape
Soaring the wind
and feeling a storm,
in a cyclone of want
I cruise to free-form
Writing my heart
into each stroke,
whispering secrets
till my voice croaks
Scrawling emotions
I lay them in verse,
cruising through memory
I sometimes submerse
When anger shoots fire
from the end of my pen,
the earth starts to tremble
and quakes till the end
When sorrow blows eddies
through the halls of my heart,
I weep with my hand
as my world falls apart
As the whippoorwill blowing
across oceans and streams,
Trans-morphing the night
into fantastical dreams
I've tentatively reached
to show you my mind,
and in opening my heart
each line was defined
These Words and phrases
I send through time,
with a passion that flames
and a touch of my rhyme
Till heavens doors
swing open for me,
I write whats inside
in flight I am free
Critiques
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Ooh
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lyz
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Changed again I see, Lol
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lyz
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
from the end of my pen.
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Proprietress
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
change
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Underneath this comment I
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Btw forgot to give you the
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Big Sis
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
We are all writers; and
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Ken ,
Calliope
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne,Jayne,Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lacy
Wafi
16 years 7 months ago
"In Flight I Am Free”
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Wafi
Wafi
16 years 7 months ago
Oh So Glad
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Big Sis